Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“always chatting”应为“always chat”，且回答重复“we always chatting”，显得不自然。建议简洁表达，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends on WeChat to keep in touch and share our daily lives.

제안: 回答中填充词较多，影响流畅性。内容较笼统，建议减少口头语，增加具体细节，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: We usually talk about our careers because we are in our twenties and planning our futures. For example, I often discuss job opportunities and challenges with my friends.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“the only one friend”应为“only one friend”。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词提升逻辑性。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows us to focus on a single topic and have a deeper conversation.

제안: 回答中“ex introverted”表达错误，应为“extroverted”或“introverted”。建议准确使用词汇，避免错误。句子结构简单，建议丰富表达。

예시: I prefer video calls on social media because I am quite introverted and feel more comfortable communicating this way.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，如“at the most of the time we are very comfortable with our world chatting”不自然且含义模糊。建议简洁明了表达，避免口头语，使用正确句式。

예시: I don't argue with my friends often. When disagreements happen, we usually discuss calmly and maintain a comfortable relationship.

× I always chatting with my friends on WeChat and we always chatting.

✓ I am always chatting with my friends on WeChat and we are always chatting.

动词后面缺少助动词，进行时态需要用be动词加动词的-ing形式。这里应使用"am chatting"和"are chatting"。

× I always chatting with my friends on WeChat and we always chatting.

✓ I always chat with my friends on WeChat and we always chat.

如果想表达习惯动作，应使用一般现在时，动词用原形加-s（第三人称单数除外），这里主语是复数或第一人称单数，直接用chat即可。

× I think careers are the most important things.

✓ I think careers are the most important things.

此句中careers和things均为复数，语法正确，无需修改。

× I prefer to chat with the only one friend because I think chatting with only one friend, uh, that I can focus on one thing and we can focus on one topic.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think chatting with only one friend allows me to focus on one thing and we can focus on one topic.

"the only one friend"表达不自然，应去掉定冠词"the"，改为"only one friend"。此外，句子结构不完整，需补充谓语动词，如"allows me"。

× I prefer to communicate video via social media because I think I am a very ex introverted person.

✓ I prefer to communicate via video on social media because I think I am a very extroverted person.

"communicate video"表达不正确，应为"communicate via video"。"ex introverted"是错误拼写，应为"extroverted"。

× Not often, if we have some conflicts on some topics I will argue with my friends, but uh, at the most of the time we are very comfortable with our world chatting.

✓ Not often. If we have some conflicts on some topics, I will argue with my friends, but most of the time we are very comfortable chatting in our world.

"at the most of the time"错误，应为"most of the time"。此外，句子结构需调整，分成两句更清晰。