Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızı daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün "uh" kimi fasilələri azaltmalı və cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın ifadə etməlisiniz. Məsələn, fikrinizi birbaşa ifadə edin və əlavə məlumatları sadə cümlələrlə verin.

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is a quick way to share messages. If I have something important to say, I prefer to call them, but usually, texting is enough.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha əlaqəli etmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin və mövzuları daha dəqiq təsvir edin. Məsələn, "We often chat about various topics, such as videos, lessons, and exercises." kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin.

예시: We usually chat about many things. For example, we talk about interesting videos, school lessons, and sometimes we help each other with exercises.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və məntiqli qurmaq üçün fikirlərinizi tam ifadə edin və lazımsız təkrarlardan çəkinin. Məsələn, "I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more personal and less confusing than group chats."

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it is more personal and easier to focus on the conversation. Group chats can be confusing sometimes.

제안: Fikirlərinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin, həmçinin keçid sözlərindən istifadə edərək cavabınızı daha məntiqli edin. Məsələn, "It depends on the topic. Sometimes I prefer face-to-face communication, but other times social media is more convenient."

예시: It depends on the topic. Sometimes I prefer to talk face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, social media is easier and faster for casual conversations.

제안: Cümlələrinizi tamamlamaq və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə etmək üçün çalışın. Həmçinin, təkrarlardan qaçın və daha spesifik nümunələr verin. Məsələn, "Sometimes we argue because we have different opinions, but we usually resolve it quickly."

예시: Sometimes we argue because we have different opinions. For example, I may not care about something that is important to my friend, but we always try to understand each other.

× I like chatting with my friends because I can send my, uh, message by text, uh, some important uh, If I have, if I had uh, an important message, I will call, but it's not necessary. I will chat chatting.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I can send my messages by text, especially if I have an important message. If I have an important message, I will call, but it's not necessary. I will chat.

The phrase 'chat chatting' is incorrect because the verb 'chat' should not be repeated with the -ing form consecutively. Also, 'message' should be plural 'messages' to match the context. The sentence structure was confusing and needed simplification for clarity.

× I like chatting with my friends because I can send my, uh, message by text, uh, some important uh, If I have, if I had uh, an important message, I will call, but it's not necessary. I will chat chatting.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I can send my messages by text, especially if I have an important message. If I have an important message, I will call, but it's not necessary. I will chat.

The phrase 'some important uh' is incomplete and incorrectly used. 'Some' is a quantifier that should be followed by a plural noun or uncountable noun. The sentence was corrected to use 'especially if I have an important message' for clarity and correctness.

× Actually, we chat about everything sometimes. Well, chatting about some videos, reels or some, uh, some lessons. Sometimes we ask about some exercises.

✓ Actually, we sometimes chat about everything. Well, we chat about some videos, reels, or some lessons. Sometimes we ask about some exercises.

The phrase 'chatting about some videos' is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. Changing it to 'we chat about some videos' corrects the sentence structure and maintains proper verb form.

× Well, chatting about some videos, reels or some, uh, some lessons.

✓ We chat about some videos, reels, or some lessons.

The repeated use of 'some' is unnecessary and awkward. Using 'some' once before the list is sufficient and more natural.

× Actually, I prefer to only chat with only one friend because it's more basic for uh. For me.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with only one friend because it's simpler for me.

The phrase 'more basic for uh. For me.' is unclear and awkward. 'Simpler for me' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression. Also, 'to only chat' is better as 'to chat' with 'only' placed before 'one friend' for clarity.

× Sometimes chatting with a group it uh has a cause because someone says talking about uh.

✓ Sometimes chatting with a group causes problems because someone says something inappropriate.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks proper subject-verb agreement and clarity. The correction provides a clear subject and verb and completes the thought logically.

× It's related with, uh, topic because sometimes I want, I prefer to talk, uh, talk about, talk about something face, face to face.

✓ It depends on the topic because sometimes I want, I prefer to talk about something face to face.

The phrase 'related with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'related to' or better 'depends on' in this context. Also, 'face, face to face' is redundant and should be 'face to face.'

× But sometimes, uh, using social media is more easier than looking on face to face.

✓ But sometimes, using social media is easier than talking face to face.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary. Also, 'looking on face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talking face to face.'

× Sometimes we have uh, uh, sometimes we have different, we look different, you know, because something is is not important for me, but it's necessary for my friend.

✓ Sometimes we have different opinions, you know, because something is not important to me, but it's necessary for my friend.

The phrase 'we look different' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'we have different opinions.' Also, 'important for me' should be 'important to me' as 'important to' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× This can cause this can cause argue, but.

✓ This can cause arguments, but...

The phrase 'cause argue' is incorrect; the noun form 'arguments' should be used. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished or left as an ellipsis to indicate continuation.