Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và không tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh dùng những từ như "nice, wonderful" liên tiếp và nên giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích trò chuyện với bạn bè.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and catch up on each other's lives. It's a great way to share stories and strengthen our relationships.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như "we are often talked about" nên là "we often talk about". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: When I chat with my friends, we often talk about our daily lives and the stresses we face. Additionally, we share personal stories and experiences to support each other.

제안: Bạn nên tránh dùng nhiều từ thừa như "uh" và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "it's allow" nên là "it allows". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations. I feel more comfortable sharing my personal stories that way.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp như "through cricket face to face" và "poem". Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và dùng từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows more effective interaction. When talking with someone in person, I can see their facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand them better.

제안: Bạn đã dùng từ sai "agree" thay vì "argue" và "district agreements" thay vì "disagreements". Hãy chú ý phát âm và chọn từ đúng để câu trả lời chính xác và tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it's nice, wonderful.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it's nice and wonderful.

The original sentence incorrectly uses two adjectives 'nice' and 'wonderful' without a conjunction. Adding 'and' correctly connects the adjectives to describe the noun.

× It's nice, wonderful way to catch up and share stories.

✓ It's a nice, wonderful way to catch up and share stories.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'nice, wonderful way'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner.

× It helps us relax and win.

✓ It helps us relax and unwind.

The word 'win' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'unwind', which means to relax. This is a vocabulary choice rather than grammar, but it affects sentence correctness.

× Yeah, when I chat with my friends, we are often talked about our daily lives and the stresses we face.

✓ Yeah, when I chat with my friends, we often talk about our daily lives and the stresses we face.

The phrase 'we are often talked about' is incorrect because 'we' should be the subject performing the action, not receiving it. The correct active form is 'we often talk about'.

× Sometimes we share personal story and experience to support each other.

✓ Sometimes we share personal stories and experiences to support each other.

The nouns 'story' and 'experience' should be plural to agree with 'we' and the context of sharing multiple instances.

× Uh, I, I prefer chatting with only friends, uh, because it's allow for deeper and, uh, more me meaningful conversations.

✓ Uh, I prefer chatting with only one friend, because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations.

'It's allow' is incorrect; the modal verb 'allows' is needed to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'only friends' is unclear; 'only one friend' fits better. 'Me meaningful' is a typo and should be 'more meaningful'.

× Uh, when I talk to just one person, I feel more comfortable sharing my secrets story.

✓ Uh, when I talk to just one person, I feel more comfortable sharing my secret story.

The phrase 'secrets story' is incorrect; 'secret story' is singular and matches the singular possessive 'my'.

× I prefer through cricket face to face because it's allow me, I don't sorry.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me, sorry.

'It's allow me' is incorrect; it should be 'it allows me' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'through cricket face to face' is unclear and likely a misstatement; 'face-to-face communication' is clearer.

× When I talking with one person, I can raise facials expressions and, uh, poem which which help me understand the pattern better.

✓ When I talk with one person, I can raise facial expressions and, uh, gestures which help me understand the partner better.

'When I talking' should be 'When I talk' to use the correct present tense. 'Facials expressions' should be 'facial expressions'. 'Poem' is likely a misused word; 'gestures' fits better. 'Pattern' should be 'partner'.

× Yes, I sometimes agree with my friends when I when we have different opinions on important topics.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions on important topics.

The sentence says 'I sometimes agree' but the question is about arguing. The correct verb is 'argue'. Also, 'I when we' is redundant; 'when we' suffices.

× However, these district agreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better.

✓ However, these disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better.

The word 'district' is incorrect; the intended word is 'disagreements', which fits the context of differing opinions.