Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, I often chat with them. Sometimes I even wanted to tell them everything that happened to me.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
There are many aspects such as games, digital products, my preferences, my mood and so on, but what's more is my mood and what happened to me.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
I think chatting with a large group of people can stimulate my desire to chat and make my imagination more abundant. Then if I chat with someone, I can relax myself better and express myself better.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
I always chatting with friends on social media because I feel that when I meet face to face I will feel a little pressure and a little tension which makes me unable to express myself better.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Yes, I sometimes argue with them about which company's products are better. There are also some national political problems. In this case, I usually insist on my own point of view.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答时时态使用不准确，且表达略显简单。建议注意时态一致性，并丰富表达内容，使回答更自然流畅。
예시: Yes, I often chat with my friends. Sometimes, I want to share everything that has happened to me because it helps me feel connected.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答内容较为笼统，缺少具体细节。建议使用更具体的例子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: I usually chat about various topics like games, digital products, and my personal preferences. However, I especially like to talk about my mood and recent experiences because they are more personal.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答结构较好，但表达略显重复。建议使用连接词优化句子结构，避免重复表达。
예시: I enjoy chatting with large groups because it stimulates my imagination. However, when I chat with one friend, I can relax and express myself more freely.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 70.0제안: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，同时丰富表达内容。
예시: I usually communicate with my friends through social media because face-to-face meetings sometimes make me feel nervous, which affects how well I express myself.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答内容较简单，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加具体例子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about which company's products are better. We also discuss national political issues, and in these cases, I usually stick firmly to my own opinions.
문법
× Sometimes I even wanted to tell them everything that happened to me.
✓ Sometimes I even want to tell them everything that happened to me.
这里的时间是现在时态，表示经常发生的事情，所以动词want应该用现在时态，而不是过去时态wanted。
× There are many aspects such as games, digital products, my preferences, my mood and so on, but what's more is my mood and what happened to me.
✓ There are many aspects such as games, digital products, my preferences, my mood and so on, but what matters more is my mood and what happened to me.
原句中使用了"what's more is"，表达不够准确，应该用"what matters more is"来强调更重要的内容。
× I always chatting with friends on social media because I feel that when I meet face to face I will feel a little pressure and a little tension which makes me unable to express myself better.
✓ I am always chatting with friends on social media because I feel that when I meet face to face I will feel a little pressure and a little tension which makes me unable to express myself better.
动词"chatting"前缺少助动词"am"，现在进行时需要用"am/is/are + 动词-ing"结构。
× I sometimes argue with them about which company's products are better.
✓ I sometimes argue with them about which company's products are better.
该句语法正确，无需修改。
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