Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“talk emergency”表达不清晰，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share interesting things quickly and helps us stay in touch.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: We usually talk about our feelings and experiences from the day. Also, we share useful information and interesting videos with each other.

제안: 回答中表达不完整且有语法错误，如“open eyes to”不明确。建议使用完整且清晰的句子，补充具体细节，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because it creates a happy atmosphere and allows me to learn new things from different people. Moreover, it broadens my perspective.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“selling emotions”用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达原因，并避免不必要的复杂表达。

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel less nervous and it’s easier to express my feelings online, which makes the conversation more relaxed and fun.

제안: 回答不完整且语法混乱，缺少连贯性和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并举例说明如何解决分歧。

예시: Yes, sometimes we have different opinions, but I usually explain my point calmly and we try to understand each other to avoid arguments.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I like sharing interesting things with them quickly and it's a great way to talk emergency with them and also is a great way to keep in touch.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I like sharing interesting things with them quickly and it's a great way to talk about emergencies with them and also is a great way to keep in touch.

句中缺少介词“about”，正确表达是“talk about emergency”，表示“谈论紧急情况”。

× We usually chat about emotional things that experienced today and we always shared useful things each other.

✓ We usually chat about emotional things that we experienced today and we always share useful things with each other.

“experienced”前缺少主语“we”，且“shared”应与“usually”搭配使用，保持一般现在时态，表示习惯性动作。

× We usually chat about emotional things that experienced today and we always shared useful things each other.

✓ We usually chat about emotional things that we experienced today and we always share useful things with each other.

“each other”前应加介词“with”，表示“彼此”。

× And I like share interesting video for her and so on.

✓ And I like to share interesting videos with her and so on.

“like”后面应接不定式“to share”，且“video”应为复数“videos”，介词应为“with”而非“for”。

× And I like share interesting video for her and so on.

✓ And I like to share interesting videos with her and so on.

“video”应使用复数形式“videos”，表示多个视频。

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can get happy atmosphere, wisdom and I can get some extra knowledge from them.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can get a happy atmosphere, wisdom, and some extra knowledge from them.

“get”后面不需要重复，且“happy atmosphere”前应加冠词“a”。

× Moreover, we can open eyes to.

✓ Moreover, we can open our eyes too.

“open eyes to”表达不完整，应为“open our eyes”，且“to”应改为“too”，表示“也”。

× I'm a little nervous when I communicated face to face with my friends and I enjoy chatting with my friends online because it's a good way to change the atmosphere by selling emotions that's I think, funny.

✓ I'm a little nervous when I communicate face to face with my friends and I enjoy chatting with my friends online because it's a good way to change the atmosphere by sharing emotions, which I think is funny.

“communicated”应为一般现在时“communicate”，与“I'm”时态一致；“selling”应为“sharing”；“that's I think, funny”语序错误，应为“which I think is funny”。

× I'm a little nervous when I communicated face to face with my friends and I enjoy chatting with my friends online because it's a good way to change the atmosphere by selling emotions that's I think, funny.

✓ I'm a little nervous when I communicate face to face with my friends and I enjoy chatting with my friends online because it's a good way to change the atmosphere by sharing emotions, which I think is funny.

“face to face”前应加介词“face-to-face”，且“selling emotions”应为“sharing emotions”，表达正确的意思。

× Yes, I seldom argue with my friends because we sometimes have different ideas on one thing. However. I always explain the knowledge and yet and then we have.

✓ Yes, I seldom argue with my friends because we sometimes have different ideas on one thing. However, I always explain my knowledge, and then we reach an agreement.

句子结构混乱，“However.”后应接逗号，“explain the knowledge”表达不清，应为“explain my knowledge”，“and yet and then we have”不完整，应改为“and then we reach an agreement”。