Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且有重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me happy and helps me forget my bad mood.

제안: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明聊天内容。

예시: Sometimes, I talk about my daily life and work. I also share my stress and discuss ways to relieve it with my friends.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，且有口语填充词。建议简洁表达，注意语法，避免使用无意义的填充词。

예시: I prefer chatting with groups because I can meet many friends and learn from their experiences.

제안: 表达有些重复且不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see their eye contact and understand their true feelings.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，清楚表达观点。

예시: Yes, sometimes we have different opinions, but we just share our true thoughts without serious arguments.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend when I chatting with them.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends when I chat with them.

这里动词形式错误，'chatting'作为动名词使用是正确的，但后面应该用一般现在时的动词'chat'，而不是'chatting'。另外，'friend'应为复数形式，因为后文指的是多个朋友。

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend when I chatting with them.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends when I chat with them.

'friend'应使用复数形式'friends'，因为后文的代词'them'指代的是复数。

× When I talk to them I will feel happiness and I have my bad mood gone.

✓ When I talk to them, I feel happy and my bad mood goes away.

这里时态和表达不自然。'will feel'改为一般现在时'feel'更合适，'happiness'应改为形容词'happy'，'I have my bad mood gone'表达不正确，应改为'my bad mood goes away'。

× Some time I will talk about my daily life and after work and my some little bit stress and I will try to figure out how to fix the the stress.

✓ Sometimes I talk about my daily life after work and some little stress, and I try to figure out how to fix the stress.

'Some time'应为副词'sometimes'，'my some little bit stress'表达不正确，应为'some little stress'，'will'去掉更符合习惯用法。

× I don't mind to chat with group of people, uh, because I like to communicate with my a lot of friends and I will get into know them.

✓ I don't mind chatting with a group of people because I like to communicate with a lot of my friends and get to know them.

'mind to chat'应为'mind chatting'，'group of people'前应加冠词'a'，'my a lot of friends'顺序错误，应为'a lot of my friends'，'get into know'应为'get to know'。

× I don't mind communicate face to face because when we face to face to speaking, I can see uh their eyes contact and to see their real thought, I can see any real thought from their eyes.

✓ I don't mind communicating face to face because when we speak face to face, I can see their eye contact and their real thoughts; I can see real thoughts from their eyes.

'mind communicate'应为'mind communicating'，'face to face to speaking'表达错误，应为'speak face to face'，'eyes contact'应为'eye contact'，'any real thought'不合适，改为'real thoughts'更自然。

× Yes, sometime we will argue some their ideas because like many people has different idea.

✓ Yes, sometimes we argue some of their ideas because many people have different ideas.

'sometime'应为副词'sometimes'，'will argue'改为一般现在时'arugue'更自然，'some their ideas'应为'some of their ideas'，'has'应为'have'，'idea'应为复数'ideas'。

× Yes, sometime we will argue some their ideas because like many people has different idea.

✓ Yes, sometimes we argue some of their ideas because many people have different ideas.

'argue some their ideas'缺少介词，应为'argue some of their ideas'。

× Umm it's not really argue, just tell the uh true of mine to each other.

✓ Umm, it's not really arguing, just telling the truth of mine to each other.

'not really argue'应为'not really arguing'，'tell the uh true of mine'表达不自然，应为'telling the truth of mine'。