Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, try to use more natural expressions and correct verb tenses, for example, 'Even if we haven't seen each other for a long time, we always stay engaged and maintain our friendship.' Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected. Even if we haven't met for a long time, we always keep in touch and maintain our friendship.

제안: Your answer covers the topic but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'was was the challenge' and 'share our daily basis.' To improve, use clearer and more natural expressions, and organise your ideas logically with linking words. For example, 'We usually talk about our day, including any challenges we faced, what we ate, and funny moments.'

예시: We usually chat about our day, including any challenges we faced, what we ate, and funny moments. This way, we share our daily experiences with each other.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can share different ideas and opinions, which makes the conversation more enjoyable.' Also, avoid informal phrases like 'get the moment even more fun.'

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can share different ideas and opinions, which makes the conversation more enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and could be more concise. For example, say 'I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see the other person's body language, which shows more interest. Also, I find it hard to talk for long periods on my phone.' This improves clarity and naturalness.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see the other person's body language, which shows more interest. Also, I find it hard to talk for long periods on my phone.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use clearer and more natural sentences, such as 'Sometimes we argue naturally, especially when we have different opinions. It can be hard to decide who is right, but disagreements do happen occasionally.'

예시: Sometimes we argue naturally, especially when we have different opinions. It can be hard to decide who is right, but disagreements do happen occasionally.

× Even if it's been a long time that we don't see, we keep always engaging and keeping the friendship.

✓ Even if it's been a long time since we have seen each other, we always keep engaging and maintaining the friendship.

The adverb 'always' was incorrectly placed after 'keep'. In English, adverbs of frequency like 'always' usually come before the main verb. Also, the phrase 'that we don't see' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'since we have seen each other' to indicate the time elapsed since last meeting.

× Usually we chat about everything we share with each other, how our day looked like, was was the challenge, what we have eaten for food, funny moments.

✓ Usually, we chat about everything we share with each other: how our day looked, what the challenges were, what we have eaten, and funny moments.

The sentence had several structural issues: 'how our day looked like' is incorrect; 'looked' does not need 'like'. 'Was was the challenge' is a repetition and incorrect structure; it should be 'what the challenges were'. Also, 'what we have eaten for food' is redundant; 'what we have eaten' suffices. The sentence was corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I do prefer communicate face to face because I think you can see the body language of the other person.

✓ I do prefer to communicate face to face because I think you can see the body language of the other person.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to communicate', not the bare infinitive 'communicate'. This is a common error in verb patterns after 'prefer'.

× I think that sometimes this can naturally happen, especially if we do have different opinions, which sometimes is a bit hard to conclude who has the reason, but I do sometimes have argue with my friends.

✓ I think that sometimes this can naturally happen, especially if we have different opinions, which sometimes makes it a bit hard to conclude who is right, but I do sometimes argue with my friends.

The phrase 'have argue' is incorrect; the verb 'argue' should be used without 'have' here. Also, 'who has the reason' is not idiomatic; the correct expression is 'who is right'. The sentence was restructured for grammatical correctness and naturalness.