Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung tốt, tuy nhiên cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tránh lỗi như "Our conversations often just about daily routines" nên là "Our conversations are often just about daily routines". Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Absolutely, I love chatting with my friends because it is the best way for me to unwind and recharge after a hectic day. Our conversations are often just about daily routines, but sometimes they turn into deep discussions which give me a new perspective on life.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ "light heart things" nên là "light-hearted things" và "through our talks diff into" nên là "our talks often drift into". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi nhỏ, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu văn rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Well, it really depends on the mood, but we usually start with light-hearted things like what happened at work or a funny story online. Quite often, our talks drift into more meaningful topics such as our career goals or even social issues, and I really appreciate those moments.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng câu cuối cùng chưa hoàn chỉnh "So it really depends on." cần được hoàn thiện để rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên tránh để câu bị dang dở và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows me to open up and have deeper, more meaningful conversations. That said, group chats can be a lot of fun too, especially when we are planning something together or just joking around. So it really depends on the situation.

제안: Bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "I've alone face to face to face interaction" nên là "I prefer face-to-face interaction" và "it feels more closer" nên là "it feels closer". Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Personally, I prefer face-to-face interaction much more than online communication because it feels closer and I can pick up on body language and emotions. Of course, social media is convenient when my friends live far away, but it can never fully replace the warmth of an in-person conversation.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "Friends from time to time, yes" nên là "Yes, friends argue from time to time" và "we tend to love them off quickly" nên là "we tend to resolve them quickly". Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

예시: Yes, friends argue from time to time, but I wouldn't really call them serious arguments. They are usually just disagreements about things like where to eat or what movie to watch, and we tend to resolve them quickly because our friendship matters more.

× Our conversations often just about daily routines.

✓ Our conversations are often just about daily routines.

The sentence lacks a verb. 'Are' is needed to complete the sentence structure and indicate the state of the conversations.

× Sometimes they turn into deep discussions that give me new perspective on life.

✓ Sometimes they turn into deep discussions that give me a new perspective on life.

The phrase 'new perspective' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'new' to be grammatically correct.

× Well it really depends on the mood but we usually start with light heart things like what happened at work or a funny story online.

✓ Well, it really depends on the mood, but we usually start with light-hearted things like what happened at work or a funny story online.

The sentence is missing commas after 'Well' and before 'but' to separate clauses properly. Also, 'light heart' should be hyphenated as 'light-hearted' to function as a compound adjective.

× Quite often through our talks diff into more meaningful topics such as our career goals or even social issues and I really appreciate most moments.

✓ Quite often, our talks drift into more meaningful topics such as our career goals or even social issues, and I really appreciate most moments.

The sentence has a typo 'diff' which should be 'drift'. Also, commas are needed after 'Quite often' and before 'and' to separate clauses properly.

× I usually prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows me to open up and have deeper, more meaningful conversations.

✓ I usually prefer chatting one-on-one because it allows me to open up and have deeper, more meaningful conversations.

This sentence is correct and does not contain grammar mistakes from the provided list.

× So it really depends on.

✓ So it really depends on the situation.

The sentence ends abruptly and is incomplete. Adding 'the situation' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Personally, I've alone face to face to face interaction much more than online communication because it feels more closer and I can pick up on body language and emotions.

✓ Personally, I prefer face-to-face interaction much more than online communication because it feels closer and I can pick up on body language and emotions.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun and word usage: 'I've alone face to face to face interaction' is incorrect. 'I prefer face-to-face interaction' is the correct form. Also, 'more closer' is redundant; 'closer' alone is correct.

× Of course social media is convenient when my friends live far away, but it can never fully replace the warmth of an in person conversation.

✓ Of course, social media is convenient when my friends live far away, but it can never fully replace the warmth of an in-person conversation.

Commas are needed after 'Of course' to separate introductory phrase. 'In person' should be hyphenated as 'in-person' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× Friends from time to time, yes, but I wouldn't really call them serious arguments.

✓ I argue with friends from time to time, yes, but I wouldn't really call them serious arguments.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb to be complete. Adding 'I argue with' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× They are usually just more disagreements about things like where to eat or what movie to watch, and we tend to love them off quickly because our friendship matters more.

✓ They are usually just minor disagreements about things like where to eat or what movie to watch, and we tend to move on quickly because our friendship matters more.

'More disagreements' is incorrect; 'minor disagreements' fits better. 'Love them off' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'move on quickly' to indicate resolving disagreements.