Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý nghĩa, nhưng bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (enjoyed nên là enjoy) và tránh lặp từ (chatting with friends). Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress and feel more relaxed and happy.

제안: Bạn trả lời chưa trực tiếp vào câu hỏi về chủ đề trò chuyện. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng về nội dung bạn thường nói chuyện và tránh lặp lại ý giống câu trước. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually chat about our daily experiences and hobbies in the evening because it helps me relax after a tiring day.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng, số nhiều/số ít chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am an introverted person, so I feel more comfortable in small groups rather than large ones.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp như thêm 'to' sau prefer, sử dụng tính từ đúng (easier thay vì more easier). Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Dùng từ nối để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer to communicate through social media because people are very busy nowadays, so it is easier and more convenient for everyone.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không rõ ràng. Bạn nên dùng câu trả lời trực tiếp, đúng thì và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn với ví dụ cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

예시: No, I don't usually argue with my friends because we understand each other well and maintain a friendly relationship.

× Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with friends because I think it is the way to release my stress and make me have a sense of relaxation and cheerfulness.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because I think it is the way to release my stress and make me have a sense of relaxation and cheerfulness.

The sentence uses 'enjoyed' which is past tense, but the context is about a general preference or habit, so present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate to match the ongoing or habitual action.

× I prefer chat with only one friends because I am an introverted person so chat with group it is.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am an introverted person, so chatting with a group is not my option.

'Friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to only one person. Also, 'prefer chat' needs 'to' before the verb. 'Chat with group it is' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'chatting with a group is not my option' for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer chat with only one friends because I am an introverted person so chat with group it is.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I am an introverted person, so chatting with a group is not my option.

The phrase 'chat with group it is' is incorrect pronoun and sentence structure. It should be rephrased to clarify meaning and use correct pronouns and structure.

× I prefer communicate through social media because in modern society people nowadays is really busy, so I think uh communicate through social media is more easier and convenient for everyone.

✓ I prefer to communicate through social media because in modern society people nowadays are really busy, so I think communicating through social media is easier and more convenient for everyone.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' before the verb. 'People is' should be 'people are' for subject-verb agreement. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is correct. Also, 'communicate' should be in gerund form 'communicating' to function as the subject.

× I prefer communicate through social media because in modern society people nowadays is really busy, so I think uh communicate through social media is more easier and convenient for everyone.

✓ I prefer to communicate through social media because in modern society people nowadays are really busy, so I think communicating through social media is easier and more convenient for everyone.

The subject 'people' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are' instead of 'is' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× I think no, because my friends and I is really comprehensive and we really they are really friendly.

✓ I think no, because my friends and I are really understanding and we are really friendly.

The subject 'my friends and I' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'comprehensive' is incorrect here; 'understanding' is the appropriate adjective.

× I think no, because my friends and I is really comprehensive and we really they are really friendly.

✓ I think no, because my friends and I are really understanding and we are really friendly.

The phrase 'we really they are really friendly' is ungrammatical and redundant. It should be simplified to 'we are really friendly' for clarity and correctness.

× So we didn't have an argument before and now.

✓ So we haven't had an argument before or now.

The sentence mixes past tense 'didn't have' with 'and now' which implies present perfect tense is more appropriate to indicate an action that has not happened up to now.