Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to answer the question directly and clearly without repeating the question. Use a simple and natural sentence structure. For example, start with 'Yes, I like to chat with my friends in my free time.'

예시: Yes, I like to chat with my friends in my free time because it helps me relax and stay connected.

제안: Make your answer more coherent and structured by using linking words and clearer sentences. Specify the topic and give examples. For instance, say 'I usually chat with my friends about cars. We discuss the latest models and their features.'

예시: I usually chat with my friends about cars. We discuss the latest models, their features, and share our opinions on them.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence fluency. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, 'I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel a bit uncomfortable in groups.'

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel a bit uncomfortable when talking in a group.

제안: Clarify your answer and avoid confusion between face-to-face and social media communication. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, 'I prefer to communicate via social media like WhatsApp and Instagram because it helps us stay connected and discuss topics easily.'

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media platforms like WhatsApp and Instagram because they help us stay connected and discuss topics conveniently.

제안: Improve sentence structure and fluency. Use linking words to explain your behaviour. For example, 'If there is an argument, I usually avoid getting involved to keep the peace.'

예시: If there is an argument, I usually avoid getting involved to keep the peace among my friends.

× Is do I like to chat with my friends when I have free time?

✓ I like to chat with my friends when I have free time.

The original sentence has an incorrect sentence structure with unnecessary auxiliary verbs 'Is do'. The correct structure is a simple present tense affirmative sentence without auxiliary verbs in this context.

× I usually chat with my friend, says the topic.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about various topics.

The original sentence incorrectly uses singular 'friend' and the phrase 'says the topic' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Using plural 'friends' fits better with the context and 'about various topics' clarifies the meaning.

× Like we are in my friends group we are or we are into cars and we talk about the latest model of the cars and more about the car features and everything.

✓ We are in a group of friends who are into cars, and we talk about the latest car models, their features, and more.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combining ideas into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually chat with my my one friend because I'm chatting with a group of people makes me little uncomfortable, so I chat with only one friend.

✓ I usually chat with one friend because chatting with a group of people makes me a little uncomfortable, so I prefer to chat with only one friend.

The sentence has repetition ('my my one friend') and incorrect article usage ('makes me little uncomfortable'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes. Do I like to communicate face to face by using WhatsApp or Facebook on Instagram because it help us to interact more to the topic.

✓ Yes, I like to communicate face to face rather than using WhatsApp, Facebook, or Instagram because it helps us interact more on the topic.

The original sentence has incorrect question form and unclear phrasing. Correcting sentence structure and verb agreement ('help' to 'helps') makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× If is there any kind of uh argument happen, I don't involve in that.

✓ If there is any kind of argument, I don't get involved in it.

The original sentence misplaces 'is there' and uses incorrect verb forms. Correcting the word order and verb usage improves grammatical correctness and clarity.