Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question with a simple topic sentence, then add a reason or example. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical errors. For example, say "Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected and supported when I'm feeling down."

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me feel connected and supported when I'm feeling down.

제안: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, "I usually chat about various topics, but mostly about pets because we both find them interesting."

예시: I usually chat about various topics, but mostly about pets because we both find them interesting.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Use correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence. For example, "I prefer chatting with one person rather than a group because it can be tiring to manage many people's feelings."

예시: I prefer chatting with one person rather than a group because it can be tiring to manage many people's feelings.

제안: Your answer needs to be clearer and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it more comfortable than talking a lot on social media."

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it more comfortable than talking a lot on social media.

제안: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Use correct grammar and linking words. For example, "Yes, we sometimes argue when our opinions differ, but we usually make up quickly because our friendship is strong."

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue when our opinions differ, but we usually make up quickly because our friendship is strong.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because I'm a like talk to people and are my phone is come from the talk from the people who I'm sad.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because I like to talk to people and my phone comes from the talks with people when I'm sad.

The original sentence incorrectly uses conjunctions and has unclear phrasing. 'I'm a like talk to people' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I like to talk to people'. 'Are my phone is come from the talk from the people who I'm sad' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'my phone comes from the talks with people when I'm sad' to express the idea clearly. The conjunction 'and' should connect two related ideas properly.

× I usually check a lot of things, not just have a one topic.

✓ I usually chat about a lot of things, not just one topic.

The phrase 'check a lot of things' is incorrect in this context; 'chat about a lot of things' is appropriate. Also, 'not just have a one topic' is ungrammatical; it should be 'not just one topic'. The quantifier 'a one' is incorrect; 'one' alone suffices.

× I usually chat pets with my friends because I like we like we both like pets and really interesting at pets.

✓ I usually chat about pets with my friends because we both like pets and find them really interesting.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'I like we like we both like pets' is incorrect; it should be 'we both like pets'. Also, 'really interesting at pets' is incorrect; it should be 'find them really interesting'. The pronouns and verb forms need to agree and be used properly.

× I'm prefer chat with one of people more than a group of people because I will feel tired about chatting with a group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with one person more than a group of people because I feel tired when chatting with a group of people.

'I'm prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer'. 'Chat with one of people' is awkward; 'chat with one person' is correct. Also, 'I will feel tired about chatting' should be 'I feel tired when chatting' to match the present tense and correct preposition usage.

× I need to take care so many people feelings and emotions so I like to chat with one people.

✓ I need to take care of so many people's feelings and emotions, so I like to chat with one person.

The phrase 'take care so many people feelings' is missing the preposition 'of' and the possessive form; it should be 'take care of so many people's feelings'. 'One people' is incorrect; 'one person' is singular and correct here.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because. Social media, I'm not just like talk too much with people I like to face to face is more comfortable for me.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I don't like to talk too much with people on social media; face to face communication is more comfortable for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connectors. 'Because.' is incomplete. The phrase 'I'm not just like talk too much with people' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I don't like to talk too much with people'. Also, 'I like to face to face is more comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'face to face communication is more comfortable'.

× Definitely yes when our opinion is different and we will have an argue and we are but we befriend so quickly.

✓ Definitely yes, when our opinions are different, we have an argument, but we become friends again quickly.

'We will have an argue' is incorrect; 'have an argument' is correct. 'We are but we befriend so quickly' is unclear; it should be 'we become friends again quickly'. The modal verb 'will' is unnecessary here as the statement is general. Also, 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'our'.