Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 과거와 현재를 비교하는 점은 좋으나, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'I enjoy' 대신 'I enjoyed'를 사용하고, 'no purpose chatting is not really' 대신 'I don't really chat without a purpose'와 같이 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 유지하고 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요.

예시: When I was a child, I enjoyed chatting with my friends, but nowadays, I only chat when I have something specific to talk about.

제안: 답변이 주제에 명확히 답하지 못하고 문장이 불완전하며 어색합니다. 'company' 대신 'work'나 'our jobs'와 같은 더 자연스러운 단어를 사용하고, 문장을 완성하여 명확한 의견을 제시하세요. 예를 들어, 'We usually talk about our jobs and coworkers'처럼 구체적으로 표현하세요.

예시: These days, we usually chat about our jobs and coworkers because many of my friends are working now.

제안: 답변이 중간에 끊기고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'prefer chatting with one friend rather than many people'와 같이 명확한 주제문을 사용하고, 이유를 간결하고 논리적으로 설명하세요. 불필요한 'umm'을 줄이고 문장을 완성하세요.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can focus on the topic and have a deeper conversation.

제안: 답변이 불완전하고 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 'face to face' 앞에 'talking' 대신 'communication'을 사용하고, 'fate'와 'faith'는 문맥에 맞지 않으니 'facial expressions'나 'body language'로 바꾸세요. 문장을 완성하고 명확한 이유를 제시하세요.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can understand their opinions better through facial expressions and body language. Sometimes, chatting via messenger causes misunderstandings.

제안: 답변이 주제에 맞게 답하고 있으나 문법과 표현이 어색합니다. 'living in tower' 대신 'living in an apartment building'과 같이 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 의견 차이를 명확히 설명하세요. 문장을 간결하게 유지하고 불필요한 'umm'을 줄이세요.

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, I think living in an apartment is convenient for going to work, but my friends prefer living closer to nature.

× When I was a child I enjoy chatting with my friend, but these days I'm not really interested in chatting with others.

✓ When I was a child I enjoyed chatting with my friends, but these days I'm not really interested in chatting with others.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Enjoy' should be in past tense 'enjoyed' to match 'When I was a child'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because chatting usually involves more than one friend.

× When I was a child I enjoy chatting with my friend, but these days I'm not really interested in chatting with others.

✓ When I was a child I enjoyed chatting with my friends, but these days I'm not really interested in chatting with others.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to multiple people the speaker chats with. Using singular here is incorrect.

× Just if I need something to talk then I try to chat.

✓ Only if I need something to talk about, then I try to chat.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'about' after 'talk' and the phrase 'Just if' is incorrect; 'Only if' is appropriate. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× But these days umm just no, no purpose chatting is not really.

✓ But these days, umm, just no, chatting without purpose is not really something I do.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'chatting without purpose' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Umm many friends are work these days and they are like they want.

✓ Umm many friends are working these days and they are like they want.

The phrase 'many friends are work' is incorrect; it should be 'many friends are working' to indicate ongoing action. The latter part is unclear but not corrected here as it doesn't fit the grammar problem list.

× We usually talk about our coworkers or both so.

✓ We usually talk about our coworkers or both.

The phrase 'or both so' is unclear and likely incomplete. Removing 'so' improves clarity. 'Coworkers' is correctly plural.

× I prefer chat, chatting with one friend to umm, chatting with ma many people umm when I when I chat with one people, then I can focus on the topic and I can sympathize and umm interact with them with the person.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend to chatting with many people. When I chat with one person, I can focus on the topic and sympathize and interact with that person.

'Ma many people' should be 'many people'. 'One people' is incorrect; 'one person' is correct. The sentence is long and fragmented; splitting improves clarity.

× I prefer chat, chatting with one friend to umm, chatting with ma many people umm when I when I chat with one people, then I can focus on the topic and I can sympathize and umm interact with them with the person.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend to chatting with many people. When I chat with one person, I can focus on the topic and sympathize and interact with that person.

'One people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; the singular form is 'person'.

× I prefer talking with face to face because UMM I think like their fate, their faith or their action is really important to UMM under understand their opinion.

✓ I prefer talking face to face because, umm, I think their face, their faith, or their actions are really important to understand their opinion.

The phrase 'talking with face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talking face to face'. 'Under understand' is incorrect; it should be 'to understand'. Also, 'fate' likely intended as 'face'.

× Sometimes UMM chatting via the messenger makes them on misunderstanding and have some trouble so I.

✓ Sometimes, umm, chatting via messenger causes misunderstandings and some trouble, so I...

'Makes them on misunderstanding' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'causes misunderstandings'. 'The messenger' can be simplified to 'messenger'.

× Yeah, sometimes we have some topic that we don't have umm, same opinion.

✓ Yeah, sometimes we have topics where we don't have the same opinion.

'Some topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'we have'. Also, 'don't have umm, same opinion' needs 'the' before 'same opinion'.

× Then I sometimes argue with my friends, for example, umm, like I, I think umm, living in tower is really important to umm go to the company, but my friends think umm more, more nature.

✓ Then I sometimes argue with my friends. For example, I think living in a tower is really important to go to the company, but my friends think more about nature.

'Living in tower' needs an article 'a' before 'tower'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; splitting and clarifying improves understanding. 'More, more nature' is corrected to 'more about nature'.