Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ 'chat' เป็น 'chatting' และ 'help' เป็น 'helps' เพื่อความเป็นธรรมชาติและถูกต้องของภาษาอังกฤษ

예시: Yes, I usually like chatting with my friends when we hang out because it helps us relax and have fun. Also, when we work together, we often share our experiences and talk about what is happening in our lives, which makes our relationship stronger.

제안: คำตอบดีแล้ว แต่ควรเพิ่มการเชื่อมโยงระหว่างประโยคเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น ใช้คำเชื่อม 'and' หรือ 'so' เพื่อให้เนื้อหาดูเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my life and how things are going at the moment. For example, I often share updates about my work and my studies, and sometimes we talk about how we are feeling emotionally, so it is a good way to catch up and support each other.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น ใช้ 'others' แทน 'other' และปรับคำกริยาให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'comes' แทน 'come' เพื่อความถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติ

예시: I prefer to chat with a group of people because sharing ideas with others or family leads to better solutions. For example, when we describe a problem together, everyone can contribute different perspectives which helps us find the best answer. I also enjoy the lively atmosphere that comes from group conversations.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคและคำศัพท์ เช่น ใช้ 'more personal' แทน 'more personally' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน รวมถึงเติมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์

예시: For me, I absolutely prefer to communicate face to face because it makes the conversation clearer and more personal. When we talk directly with someone, we can easily understand their emotions through facial expressions and body language, which is difficult to do on social media.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน เช่น ใช้ 'rarely' แทน 'rightly' และปรับคำกริยาให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'happens' แทน 'happen' เพื่อความถูกต้องและความเข้าใจง่าย

예시: For me, I rarely argue with my friends because we usually try to avoid conflicts and focus on understanding each other. If any small disagreement happens, we prefer to ignore it rather than make a big deal. This helps me maintain longer relationships.

× Yes, I usually like chat with my friends when we hang out because it help us relax and have fun.

✓ Yes, I usually like chatting with my friends when we hang out because it helps us relax and have fun.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' instead of the base form 'chat'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Also when we work together we often share our experiences and talk about what is happening in our life which make our relationship stronger.

✓ Also when we work together we often share our experiences and talk about what is happening in our lives which makes our relationship stronger.

The noun 'life' should be plural 'lives' because it refers to multiple people. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'what is happening in our lives'. This ensures subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because sharing ideas with other or family to better solutions.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because sharing ideas with others or family leads to better solutions.

The word 'other' should be 'others' to correctly refer to other people. Also, the sentence was missing a verb to connect the ideas; 'leads' is added for clarity and correctness.

× I also enjoy the lively atmosphere that come from group conversation.

✓ I also enjoy the lively atmosphere that comes from group conversation.

The verb 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with the singular noun 'atmosphere'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× For me, absolutely I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes the conversation clear and more personally, when we talk directly with someone, you can easily understand their emotions through facial expressions and body language, which is difficult to do on social media, for example during.

✓ For me, absolutely I prefer to communicate face to face because it makes the conversation clear and more personal. When we talk directly with someone, you can easily understand their emotions through facial expressions and body language, which is difficult to do on social media, for example during calls.

The adverb 'personally' should be the adjective 'personal' to describe 'conversation'. The sentence was a run-on and needed to be split for clarity. Also, the phrase 'for example during' was incomplete and needed clarification; 'for example during calls' completes the thought.

× Uh, for me, I rightly argue with my friends because we usually try to avoid conflicts and focus on understanding each other.

✓ Uh, for me, I rarely argue with my friends because we usually try to avoid conflicts and focus on understanding each other.

The word 'rightly' is incorrect in this context; 'rarely' correctly expresses the intended meaning of infrequent arguing. This is a modal verb usage issue related to adverb choice.

× If any small disagreement happen, we offer prefer to ignore them rather than make a big deal.

✓ If any small disagreement happens, we often prefer to ignore them rather than make a big deal.

The verb 'happen' should be 'happens' to agree with the singular subject 'disagreement'. Also, 'offer prefer' is incorrect; 'often prefer' is the correct phrase. This addresses subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× This is help me maintain longer relationship.

✓ This helps me maintain a longer relationship.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'longer relationship' to be grammatically correct.