Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Also, use plural form correctly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because they are great listeners and never interrupt me, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'MMM' and unnecessary phrases like 'thank you for the question'. Be more specific about the topics you discuss and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: We usually talk about our daily lives, such as school, hobbies, and recent experiences, because we share everything as close friends.

제안: Improve clarity by correcting grammar and vocabulary ('region' should be 'reason'). Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, I often feel left out as others may not listen to me properly.

제안: Clarify your answer by using correct expressions and grammar. Avoid vague phrases like 'endeavored' and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear preference with reasons and linking words.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I am neither very introverted nor extroverted, so online chatting feels more comfortable for me.

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to explain the frequency and reasons for arguments.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue, but it is rare because we respect each other's opinions in our friend circle.

× Yes, I do like chatting with friends especially with my boys friends who are great listener and they don't even interrupt me whenever I am talking too much so I love them. Yes.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with friends especially with my boyfriends who are great listeners and they don't even interrupt me whenever I am talking too much so I love them. Yes.

The phrase 'boys friends' should be 'boyfriends' as it refers to a singular noun compound. Also, 'great listener' should be plural 'great listeners' to agree with the plural subject 'boyfriends'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× So we usually talk about what's going on our life.

✓ So we usually talk about what's going on in our lives.

The phrase 'going on our life' is missing the preposition 'in' and 'life' should be plural 'lives' to match the plural subject 'we'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and singular/plural issue.

× Like basically we just chat anything because we are friends and there is nothing such a specific topic but yes.

✓ Like basically we just chat about anything because we are friends and there is no such specific topic but yes.

The phrase 'chat anything' is incorrect; it should be 'chat about anything'. Also, 'there is nothing such a specific topic' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no such specific topic'. This involves incorrect use of prepositions and singular/plural issues.

× I usually like to chat with only one person, so yes, I would like to prefer only one friend because I will give you the region.

✓ I usually like to chat with only one person, so yes, I would prefer only one friend because I will give you the reason.

The word 'region' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'reason'. This is a vocabulary error but related to sentence structure and meaning.

× So if there are many friends in a group, I will feel left out, they will not hear.

✓ So if there are many friends in a group, I will feel left out because they will not hear me.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'because they will not hear me' clarifies the meaning. This is a sentence structure issue.

× Basically chatting with friend face to face is kinda hard for me because I am endeavored not much introvert or not much extrovert.

✓ Basically chatting with friends face to face is kinda hard for me because I am neither much of an introvert nor much of an extrovert.

The phrase 'chatting with friend' should be 'chatting with friends' (plural). Also, 'endeavored not much introvert or not much extrovert' is incorrect; it should be 'neither much of an introvert nor much of an extrovert'. This is incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure.

× Yes, sometimes we do argue, but not much because in friends circle there is some kind of argument there, but not much, yeah.

✓ Yes, sometimes we do argue, but not much because in a friends' circle there are some kinds of arguments, but not much, yeah.

The phrase 'in friends circle' should be 'in a friends' circle' with correct possessive form and article. Also, 'there is some kind of argument' should be plural 'there are some kinds of arguments' to agree with plural subject. This is incorrect use of articles and singular/plural issues.