Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь избегать повторений и пауз в речи, чтобы ответ звучал более естественно и уверенно. Используйте связки для плавного перехода между идеями.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, but I prefer talking to them face-to-face rather than on the phone because it feels more personal and engaging.

제안: Избегайте повторений и старайтесь использовать более точные слова. Добавляйте связки для логичности и конкретные детали для обогащения ответа.

예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about our plans and future dreams. Additionally, we use chat apps to decide where to meet, which makes organizing easier.

제안: Работайте над грамматикой и избегайте пауз. Используйте связки для объяснения причин и делайте ответ более связным.

예시: Honestly, I prefer chatting with only one friend because in group chats, not everyone replies to my messages, which can be frustrating.

제안: Старайтесь говорить более уверенно и избегать повторений. Используйте связки для контраста и объяснения своих предпочтений.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my best friends because it's more personal. However, with acquaintances, I usually chat on Instagram or WhatsApp since I feel less confident speaking directly.

제안: Избегайте пауз и незавершённых мыслей. Формулируйте полные предложения и объясняйте свои ответы более ясно.

예시: I usually don't argue with my friends, but sometimes disagreements happen. However, I try to avoid conflicts to maintain good relationships.

× Honestly, yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends uh, however I enjoy, however I I like I like talking with my friends directly with the with uh, not uh, by mobile phone because when you speak.

✓ Honestly, yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends; however, I like talking with my friends directly, not by mobile phone, because when you speak.

The original sentence misuses the conjunction 'however' multiple times and lacks proper punctuation. Using a semicolon before 'however' and commas after it improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Usually I chat with my friends to to discuss to discuss our plans and the future future dreams. Also we use the use chart to to decide the place where we meet.

✓ Usually, I chat with my friends to discuss our plans and future dreams. Also, we use chat to decide the place where we meet.

The sentence contains repeated words and incorrect use of 'the use chart'. The phrase 'use chat' is more appropriate than 'use the use chart'. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× Honestly, I prefer chat to chat with only friends because when I charge with in Group, uh, not everyone replied to my message. Therefore I prefer chatting with only one person.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to chat with only friends because when I chat within a group, not everyone replies to my message. Therefore, I prefer chatting with only one person.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb ('to chat'). 'Charge' is incorrect and should be 'chat'. Also, 'replied' should be 'replies' to match present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Honestly, I prefer to communicate face to face with with the best friends. Whoever when it comes to only not not best friends, I like chatting only on Instagram or on WhatsApp because I don't feel confident.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to communicate face to face with my best friends. However, when it comes to not-so-best friends, I like chatting only on Instagram or WhatsApp because I don't feel confident.

The phrase 'with the best friends' is incorrect; 'with my best friends' is appropriate. 'Whoever' is misused and should be replaced with 'However'. Also, 'not not best friends' is corrected to 'not-so-best friends' for clarity.

× Honestly, I don't argue uh, with my friends, but sometimes yeah. Umm. However, I try to avoid uh. Confident.

✓ Honestly, I don't argue with my friends, but sometimes I do. However, I try to avoid conflicts.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Confident' is incorrectly used; likely the intended word is 'conflicts'. The corrected sentence is complete and clear.