Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper verb forms and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say 'I enjoy chatting with my friends both offline and online because of my hectic schedule. I usually use social media platforms like Instagram, Snapchat, and WhatsApp to stay connected, which is very convenient.'

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends both offline and online because my schedule is quite busy. I often use social media platforms such as Instagram, Snapchat, and WhatsApp to keep in touch, which makes communication very convenient.

제안: Focus on making your sentences clearer and more coherent by using appropriate linking words and correct grammar. Also, be specific about the topics you discuss. For example, say 'We usually chat about our daily lives and share updates about current events. Additionally, we discuss our studies, which makes our conversations more engaging and longer.'

예시: We usually talk about our daily lives and share updates about what's happening around us. Moreover, we discuss our studies, which makes our conversations more interesting and often last a long time.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar by structuring your answer properly. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with one close friend rather than a group because I feel more comfortable sharing my feelings. I have a best friend with whom I share everything, which makes our conversations interesting and meaningful.'

예시: I prefer chatting with one close friend rather than a group because I don't usually share my feelings with many people. I have a best friend with whom I share everything, and that makes our conversations very interesting and meaningful.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using smoother linking words and correcting grammar. For example, say 'Honestly, it depends on the situation. When I have plenty of time, I prefer face-to-face communication because it makes the conversation more interesting and meaningful. However, if I am busy, I prefer chatting online to save time.'

예시: Honestly, it depends on the situation. When I have plenty of time, I prefer to communicate face-to-face as it makes the conversation more interesting and meaningful. However, if I am busy with work, I prefer chatting online to save time.

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. For example, say 'I rarely argue with my close friends, but if I believe they need to know the truth or are wrong, I discuss it with them calmly and respectfully.'

예시: I rarely argue with my close friends. However, if I feel they need to know the truth or are mistaken, I calmly and respectfully discuss it with them.

× For sure, I do chatting with my friends offline as well as online nowadays because of my hectic schedule.

✓ For sure, I do chat with my friends offline as well as online nowadays because of my hectic schedule.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Do chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'do chat'.

× I talk with my friend online on social media through different platforms like Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp which make it convenient for me to give them some.

✓ I talk with my friends online on social media through different platforms like Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp which make it convenient for me to give them some.

The subject 'friends' is plural, so the verb should agree accordingly. Also, 'friend' should be plural to match the context of multiple platforms and multiple friends. 'Make' is correct as it refers to 'platforms'.

× I talk with my friend online on social media through different platforms like Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp which make it convenient for me to give them some.

✓ I talk with my friends online on social media through different platforms like Instagram, Snapchat, WhatsApp which make it convenient for me to give them some time.

The phrase 'give them some' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'give them some time' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× They are really kind of topic, like we talk about our daily lives, taking updates about what's happening around us.

✓ They are really kinds of topics, like we talk about our daily lives, taking updates about what's happening around us.

The phrase 'kind of topic' is incorrect. It should be 'kinds of topics' to correctly express variety in topics.

× Moreover, we share information regarding our studies also, which make our conversation more interesting and we talk about for a long time.

✓ Moreover, we share information regarding our studies also, which makes our conversation more interesting and we talk about it for a long time.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'information'. Also, 'talk about' needs an object, so 'it' is added.

× Yeah, I do not share my feelings or my emotion with a group of people.

✓ Yeah, I do not share my feelings or my emotions with a group of people.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'feelings' and to be grammatically correct.

× But yes, I have a best friend with whom I share my each and everything which I like and which I do not like about.

✓ But yes, I have a best friend with whom I share each and everything I like and do not like.

The phrase 'my each and everything which I like and which I do not like about' is awkward and incorrect. 'My' is unnecessary before 'each and everything', and 'about' at the end is redundant.

× And moreover it is interesting for me and it she is also with me every time.

✓ Moreover, it is interesting for me and she is also with me all the time.

The phrase 'it she is also with me every time' is incorrect. 'It' is unnecessary and 'every time' should be 'all the time' for natural expression.

× So I really share my information with.

✓ So I really share my information with her.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'with'. Adding 'her' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Honestly speaking is totally dependent on situation.

✓ Honestly speaking, it is totally dependent on the situation.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' and the definite article 'the' before 'situation'. Also, a comma after 'Honestly speaking' improves clarity.

× Whenever I have a plenty of time, I prefer to chat face to face which make the conversation more interesting and meaningful.

✓ Whenever I have plenty of time, I prefer to chat face to face which makes the conversation more interesting and meaningful.

'A plenty of time' is incorrect; 'plenty of time' is correct. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'chat' or 'conversation'.

× Moreover, because if I have no time and I am busy in my work, I prefer to chat online to save my time.

✓ Moreover, if I have no time and I am busy with my work, I prefer to chat online to save my time.

The phrase 'Moreover, because if' is redundant; 'Moreover' or 'because' alone is sufficient. Also, 'busy in my work' should be 'busy with my work'.

× Not really. I do not argue with my friends whom I am very connected and close to them, but whenever I feel that they have to know about the truth in that case, I argue with them.

✓ Not really. I do not argue with my friends to whom I am very connected and close, but whenever I feel that they need to know the truth, in that case, I argue with them.

The phrase 'whom I am very connected and close to them' is incorrect. 'To whom I am very connected and close' is correct. Also, 'have to know about the truth' should be 'need to know the truth'.

× Whenever I feel that they are wrong in that situation, I really argue with them, but in a good manner.

✓ Whenever I feel that they are wrong in that situation, I really argue with them, but in a good way.

The phrase 'in a good manner' is less natural; 'in a good way' is more commonly used in spoken English.