Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to make your response more natural and concise by avoiding repeated words and organizing your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I don't usually like chatting with friends through text. Instead, I prefer video calls because they allow me to communicate more effectively, especially when I need urgent information. For casual conversations, I find video calls more enjoyable than chatting for hours.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about personal matters that are difficult to discuss face-to-face or during video calls. For example, I might share sensitive feelings or private information through chat because it feels more comfortable.

제안: Your answer has a good idea but is a bit repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons using linking words for better flow.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I believe it's important to have a close person with whom I can share my pain, happiness, and funny moments. This kind of deep connection is harder to achieve in a group chat.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding redundancy and using linking words. Try to explain your preference with specific reasons and examples.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express feelings more genuinely. Unlike social media, face-to-face talks help me understand emotions better through body language and tone.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I usually don't argue with my friends because I value our relationship. However, if someone spreads false information about me, I feel the need to argue to clarify the truth.

× I would say I'm not a chat chat person.

✓ I would say I'm not a chatting person.

The phrase 'chat chat person' is incorrect. The correct form is 'chatting person' using the present participle to describe the type of person.

× And whenever I needed to ask for something or something emergency information that I needed, then I usually chat with them.

✓ And whenever I need to ask for something or some emergency information, I usually chat with them.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'needed' when referring to habitual actions. Present tense 'need' is appropriate for habitual or general truths.

× But but for other purposes, I like to like. Like for talking for hours and hours.

✓ But for other purposes, I like to talk for hours and hours.

The phrase 'like to like' is redundant and incorrect. The verb 'talk' should be in base form after 'like to'.

× I would like to prefer talking in a video call.

✓ I would prefer talking in a video call.

The phrase 'would like to prefer' is incorrect. 'Would prefer' is the correct modal verb phrase to express preference.

× I like to talk to him in a video because but when the question comes into the chat, what do I usually chat with my friends?

✓ I like to talk to them in a video, but when the question comes about chatting, what do I usually chat with my friends?

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect when referring to multiple friends; 'them' is appropriate. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× The things that I that I can't able to say them in a video call or face to face.

✓ The things that I can't say in a video call or face to face.

The phrase 'can't able to say them' is incorrect. 'Can't say' is correct; 'able to' is redundant and 'them' is unnecessary here.

× I usually talks that kind of things with my friends in a chat.

✓ I usually talk about those kinds of things with my friends in a chat.

The verb 'talks' should be 'talk' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'that kind of things' should be 'those kinds of things' for correct plural usage.

× I really prefer talking with only one friend because I really I think there should be 1 friend in your life with whom you share all of your pain, all of your funny things, all of your happiness.

✓ I really prefer talking with only one friend because I think there should be one friend in your life with whom you share all your pain, all your funny moments, and all your happiness.

The phrase 'all of your funny things' is awkward; 'funny moments' is more natural. Also, '1' should be spelled out as 'one' in formal speech.

× I think that kind of things that is really needed to be happen with that one person rather than sharing with the group of friends.

✓ I think those kinds of things really need to happen with that one person rather than sharing with a group of friends.

'That kind of things' is incorrect; 'those kinds of things' is correct plural form. Also, 'is really needed to be happen' is incorrect; 'really need to happen' is correct.

× As I said, I'm a big fan of communicating face to face rather than communicating in a via social media because the feeling that you express in face to face cannot be compared to compare while talking in the social media.

✓ As I said, I'm a big fan of communicating face to face rather than via social media because the feelings you express face to face cannot be compared to those when talking on social media.

The phrase 'in a via social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is correct. Also, 'in face to face' should be 'face to face' without 'in'. 'On social media' is the correct preposition.

× Usually I don't argue with my friend, but when when it comes to me and the thing that I have said them and and the things that are circulating are making the fake scenario or then in that particular case I used to argue them.

✓ Usually I don't argue with my friends, but when it comes to me and the things I have said, and the things that are circulating create a false scenario, then in that particular case I argue with them.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match context. 'Used to argue them' is incorrect; 'argue with them' is correct. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Otherwise I really don't. I don't like to argue with my friends. I think they are the closest one.

✓ Otherwise, I really don't. I don't like to argue with my friends. I think they are the closest ones.

'Closest one' should be plural 'closest ones' to agree with plural 'friends'.