Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answerが不自然で繰り返しや間投詞が多いです。もっと簡潔に、直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べましょう。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me understand their ideas and share my own thoughts.

제안: 内容が少し曖昧で文法も不正確です。具体的な話題を整理して、文を簡潔にしましょう。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about my summer vacation, weekend activities, future plans, and sometimes about my brothers.

제안: 繰り返しや間投詞が多いです。理由を明確にし、流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because we can have deeper and more meaningful conversations.

제안: 理由は良いですが、文法と表現を改善し、より自然な英語にしましょう。

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel nervous when talking face-to-face, so social media helps me feel more comfortable.

제안: 文法が不正確で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。

예시: I don't argue with my friends because I understand that everyone has different ideas and opinions.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because umm, only when I uh, when I, I'm chatting with my friends, I can uh, know the other person's idea and then I can umm.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because, umm, only when I, uh, when I am chatting with my friends, I can, uh, know their ideas and then I can, umm.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the other person's idea' which is singular and specific, but the context implies multiple friends with multiple ideas. Using 'their ideas' correctly matches the plural subject 'friends' and is more natural in English.

× I usually uh, chat with my friends about umm, where I went, uh, during the summer vacation or uh, weekend or what I will do in my future or my brothers about.

✓ I usually, uh, chat with my friends about, umm, where I went during the summer vacation or weekend, or what I will do in the future, or about my brothers.

The original sentence misplaces 'about' at the end and awkwardly connects topics. Correct preposition placement is important; 'about' should precede the topic it relates to. Also, 'in my future' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in the future'.

× I prefer to chat with only, uh, chat with only one friend because umm, we can talk the things more deeply, uh, with only one friend. MMM.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because, umm, we can talk about things more deeply with only one friend.

The phrase 'talk the things' is incorrect; the verb 'talk' should be followed by 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'the things' is too specific; 'things' without 'the' is more natural here.

× I prefer to communicate, umm, we via social media because, umm, I'll be nervous, uh, when we talk, uh, with face to face. So using social media can relieve me.

✓ I prefer to communicate, umm, via social media because, umm, I get nervous when I talk face to face. So using social media can relieve me.

The phrase 'we via social media' is incorrect; 'we' is unnecessary here. Also, 'when we talk, uh, with face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'when I talk face to face'. Prepositions and pronouns must be used correctly to convey meaning clearly.

× I don't argue with my friends, umm, because I understand uh, we many people's ideas and thoughts and opinions is uh, different so. Yes.

✓ I don't argue with my friends, umm, because I understand that many people's ideas, thoughts, and opinions are different. So, yes.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'we many people's ideas' which is ungrammatical. It should be 'that many people's ideas...' Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'ideas, thoughts, and opinions'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.