Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇表达，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends every day because it helps me relax and strengthens our friendship. We usually talk through social media platforms like WeChat or others.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体的例子。

예시: We usually talk about various topics, such as the latest technical news, because as university students, it's important to stay updated. Besides that, we also share interesting things from our daily lives.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议分句表达，使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

예시: It depends on my mood. If I am upset, I prefer to chat with one friend so that we can talk personally, and he can help me feel better. However, if I am happy, I like to chat with a group of friends.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不流畅。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法和词汇，并举例说明。

예시: I like both face-to-face communication and chatting via social media because each has its advantages. For example, face-to-face allows me to see my friends' emotions clearly, which helps understanding, while social media is convenient when we are far apart.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue, for example, about the direction of a scientific experiment. We might get angry during the argument, but afterwards, we understand each other and move on.

× At the salute today, a yearly gentleman, I almost changed my chat with my friends every day because cheating with someone will will make me feel relaxed and strengthen our friendship.

✓ At the salute today, a yearly gentleman, I almost change my chats with my friends every day because chatting with someone will make me feel relaxed and strengthen our friendship.

这里“chat”应使用复数形式“chats”，因为表示多次聊天的行为；“cheating”应为“chatting”，拼写错误且语义不符。

× We always change on the social media such as we chat or or another social medias.

✓ We always chat on social media such as WeChat or other social media platforms.

“change on the social media”表达不正确，应为“chat on social media”；“another social medias”中“another”用于单数，复数应使用“other”；“social medias”应为“social media”，media本身是复数。

× Were you noticed about a variety of topics such as the technical news?

✓ Are you aware of a variety of topics such as technical news?

“Were you noticed about”结构错误，应使用“Are you aware of”表达“你是否知道”；“the technical news”中“the”不必要。

× We will also communicate with each other at the topic of some things interesting in our daily lives.

✓ We will also communicate with each other on topics about interesting things in our daily lives.

“communicate with each other at the topic of”表达错误，应为“communicate on topics about”；“some things interesting”词序错误，应为“interesting things”。

× Well it really depends on my emotions if I am upset.

✓ Well, it really depends on my emotions. If I am upset,

句子缺少逗号分隔，导致结构不清晰，应分开为两个句子。

× If I am upset, I prefer to chat with one friend so that we could chat personally and be cool and he could help me too go out of upset as if I am happy I prefer to choice a group of friends.

✓ If I am upset, I prefer to chat with one friend so that we can chat personally and he can help me get out of being upset. If I am happy, I prefer to choose a group of friends.

“could”改为“can”表示现在能力；“too go out of upset”错误，应为“help me get out of being upset”；“choice”应为动词“choose”；句子过长，应分为两句。

× Well, I love this two ways, both since they all have their own advantages.

✓ Well, I love these two ways, both since they have their own advantages.

“this two ways”应为“these two ways”，指代复数；“they all”中“all”多余。

× Sometimes I would like to chat with friends face to face because it allow me to observe the emotion on the front face thereby thereby enhance the understanding and sometimes I prefer to chat with them on the.

✓ Sometimes I would like to chat with friends face to face because it allows me to observe their emotions and thereby enhance understanding. Sometimes I prefer to chat with them online.

“it allow”应为“it allows”，主谓一致；“the emotion on the front face”表达不自然，改为“their emotions”；句子不完整，补充“online”。

× Sure, of course, sometimes we will have some argues.

✓ Sure, of course, sometimes we will have some arguments.

“argues”错误，名词应为“arguments”。

× For instance, we will get argues at the direction of one scientific experiment.

✓ For instance, we will have arguments about the direction of a scientific experiment.

“get argues at the direction”表达错误，应为“have arguments about the direction”；“one scientific experiment”改为“a scientific experiment”。

× We will have a angry argument.

✓ We will have an angry argument.

“a”应改为“an”，因为“angry”以元音音素开头。

× But after that we will get a simple intent.

✓ But after that we will reach a simple agreement.

“a simple intent”表达不当，应为“a simple agreement”表示达成共识。