Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词使句子更流畅。例如，可以减少重复的词汇，注意语法结构。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps build strong relationships. Through conversations, we can share ideas and discover interesting things, which makes me feel happy and positive.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误。建议用简单明了的句子表达聊天内容，并避免重复和错误。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about recent news, like who has returned to school or if someone is having disagreements with others.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误。建议直接表达观点，并用连词说明原因，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows us to have a more detailed and meaningful conversation.

제안: 回答中词汇使用不准确，语法错误较多。建议使用正确的表达方式，并用连词连接句子，使回答更自然。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than through social media because face-to-face conversations are more engaging and effective.

제안: 回答基本清楚，但时态使用不当。建议使用现在时态表达习惯，并用连词丰富句子。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but most of the time I try to avoid arguments to maintain good relationships.

× Chatting with friends is very interesting and meaningful because we can share our ideas and we can find something, we can explore something interesting thing to gain emotion, more positive emotion.

✓ Chatting with friends is very interesting and meaningful because we can share our ideas and find something, explore something interesting to gain more positive emotions.

The original sentence has redundant use of 'we can' and awkward phrasing 'something interesting thing'. Removing repeated phrases and correcting 'something interesting thing' to 'something interesting' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I frank we usually chat with some some other news, such as who are back up, who are who are arguing with others.

✓ I think we usually chat about some news, such as who is backing up whom, or who is arguing with others.

The original sentence contains a typo 'frank' instead of 'think', repeated words 'some some', and unclear phrases 'who are back up'. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammatical structure.

× I think that I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is an opportunity for us to to to chat detailedly.

✓ I think that I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is an opportunity for us to chat in detail.

The phrase 'to to to chat detailedly' is incorrect. 'Detailedly' is not commonly used; 'in detail' is the correct adverbial phrase. Also, repeated 'to' should be removed.

× I perform to communicate face to face rather than check on social media because I find that our chat is more intensive when we are chat face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than check social media because I find that our chat is more intensive when we chat face to face.

The word 'perform' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer'. Also, 'check on social media' is better as 'check social media'. The phrase 'when we are chat' should be 'when we chat' for correct verb form.

× Yes, I did, but most of the time I prefer to avoid arguing with friends actively.

✓ Yes, I have, but most of the time I prefer to avoid arguing with friends actively.

The response 'Yes, I did' is incomplete and awkward. Using present perfect 'Yes, I have' is more appropriate to indicate experience. The rest of the sentence is correct.