Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的观点，但语言不够自然，有些表达不够准确，比如“when I was available”应改为“when I am free”，并且句子结构稍显复杂。建议使用更自然简洁的表达方式，同时避免重复“everyday”。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. Whenever I am free, I usually use WeChat to talk with them, which makes my daily life more interesting.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子，明确表达不同情境下聊天内容，并使用连接词如“however”或“on the other hand”来增强逻辑性。

예시: It depends on the situation. When we want to relax, we usually talk about casual and interesting topics. However, if we have homework, we discuss how to complete it effectively.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“change your mind”用法不当，且句子不够流畅。建议使用更准确的表达，说明原因并保持句子简洁。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations can sometimes lead to disagreements, and talking one-on-one makes me feel more comfortable.

제안: 回答表达了两种沟通方式的偏好，但时态使用不当（应使用一般现在时），且句子重复。建议使用更自然的时态和简洁表达。

예시: I prefer both ways. At school, I usually talk to my classmates face-to-face, but at home, I use WeChat to communicate with them.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用错误，如“burst into quarters”和“solitary our relationship”不合适。建议使用正确表达描述争吵的常见性及其对关系的影响。

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different opinions. However, I think it's normal and can even strengthen our friendship.

× When I was available, I would use my WeChat to find my friends to chat online, which can add color to the everyday routine of everyday life.

✓ When I was available, I would use my WeChat to find my friends to chat online, which could add color to the everyday routine of everyday life.

这里的“can”应该用过去时态“could”，因为前面用了过去时态“was available”和“would”，时态需要保持一致。

× I think when you are chatting with a group of people you have to change your mind because in in case of quarrels, but when you talk to only one people you can feel less nervous.

✓ I think when you are chatting with a group of people you have to change your mind because in case of quarrels, but when you talk to only one person you can feel less nervous.

“only one people”中“people”是复数，应该用单数“person”来指代一个人。

× I think when you are chatting with a group of people you have to change your mind because in in case of quarrels, but when you talk to only one people you can feel less nervous.

✓ I think when you are chatting with a group of people you have to change your mind because in case of quarrels, but when you talk to only one person you can feel less nervous.

“in in case of”中重复了“in”，应去掉一个“in”，正确表达为“in case of”。

× But when I was in my house, no one like my classmates would be in the house.

✓ But when I am in my house, no one like my classmates is in the house.

这里描述的是习惯性动作或现在的情况，应该用一般现在时“am”和“is”，而不是过去时“was”和“would be”。

× But when I was in my house, no one like my classmates would be in the house.

✓ But when I am in my house, no one like my classmates is in the house.

“no one like my classmates”中“like”应为“likes”，因为主语是第三人称单数“no one”，动词需加-s。

× Yeah, sometimes I think this is a very common thing in the daily life when we have different arguments about one thing, we would burst into quarters, but I think this is very normal.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I think this is a very common thing in daily life when we have different arguments about one thing, we would burst into quarrels, but I think this is very normal.

“burst into quarters”是错误表达，正确的短语是“burst into quarrels”，表示爆发争吵。

× So sometimes I think the this can solitary our relationship.

✓ So sometimes I think this can solidify our relationship.

“solitary”是形容词，意思是孤独的，错误使用。正确词应为“solidify”，意思是巩固，符合句意。