Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a busy day at school. Moreover, my friends often share interesting life experiences and news, which helps me learn new things."

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a busy day at school. Moreover, my friends often share interesting life experiences and news, which helps me learn new things.

제안: Focus on making your sentences clear and grammatically correct. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrases like "interesting for looking." Try to be specific about topics you discuss.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, hobbies, and school projects. For example, we often share music we like and talk about fun stories or movies we've seen. These conversations make our time together more enjoyable.

제안: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "because" and "also" properly. For example, say: "I prefer chatting with a group because they share many ideas, which helps me learn more."

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because they share many ideas, which helps me learn more. Also, group conversations are more lively and interesting.

제안: Avoid filler words like "uh" and "umm" and complete your sentences. Use clear expressions and linking words. For example: "I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand real problems and feelings compared to social media."

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand real problems and feelings compared to social media. This way, we can communicate more clearly and avoid misunderstandings.

제안: Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases like "different sort" and incomplete thoughts. For example: "I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions, such as when deciding on a solution for a school project."

예시: I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions, such as when deciding on a solution for a school project. However, we always try to listen to each other and find the best answer together.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it's helped me to feel relaxed and really stressed after my busy class.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me to feel relaxed and less stressed after my busy class.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past participle 'helped' with 'it's' (it is), which is present tense. The correct form is 'it helps' to match the present tense context. Also, 'really stressed' should be 'less stressed' to convey the intended meaning of feeling more relaxed and less stressed.

× Also, chatting with friends is a is an activity that I enjoy doing the most because my friends always share life experiences and the news that I that can improve my knowledge and I can know the experiences of.

✓ Also, chatting with friends is an activity that I enjoy doing the most because my friends always share life experiences and news that can improve my knowledge and help me learn from their experiences.

The sentence has redundant words 'is a is an' and an incomplete phrase 'that I that can improve'. The correction removes redundancy and clarifies the sentence structure for better understanding.

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily life, sometime daily activity, hobby or the school project.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily life, sometimes daily activities, hobbies, or school projects.

The original sentence has singular forms 'activity', 'hobby', and 'project' where plural forms are appropriate to match the context of multiple activities, hobbies, and projects.

× Also we enjoy sharing some music for listening and sometime the fun story or movie that we sing.

✓ Also, we enjoy sharing some music to listen to and sometimes fun stories or movies that we like.

The adverb 'sometimes' was misspelled as 'sometime' and misplaced. The phrase 'music for listening' is awkward; 'music to listen to' is more natural. 'The fun story or movie that we sing' is unclear; corrected to 'fun stories or movies that we like' for clarity.

× It is more interesting for looking, also discussing.

✓ It is more interesting to watch and discuss.

The phrase 'for looking' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' with the verb 'watch'. Also, 'discussing' should be parallel with 'watch', so 'to watch and discuss' is correct.

× I definitely prefer to chat with a group of people because I think a group of people would make a different things such as they will have many ideas to share with all of us.

✓ I definitely prefer to chat with a group of people because I think a group of people would make different things, such as having many ideas to share with all of us.

The phrase 'a different things' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'things'. It should be 'different things' without 'a'. Also, 'they will have' is better expressed as 'having' to fit the sentence structure.

× Also, groups of people would definitely help us to improve our knowledge to get a better one.

✓ Also, groups of people would definitely help us improve our knowledge to get better.

The phrase 'to get a better one' is unclear and unnecessary. 'Improve our knowledge to get better' is more natural. Also, 'help us to improve' can be simplified to 'help us improve'.

× So I think it would bring me some.

✓ So I think it would bring me some benefits.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'some' without specifying what. Adding 'benefits' completes the thought and improves clarity.

× I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because I think uh, meeting in the relative would be easier than social media.

✓ I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because I think meeting in person would be easier than on social media.

The phrase 'meeting in the relative' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'meeting in person'. Also, 'than social media' should be 'than on social media' to use the correct preposition.

× Additionally, umm meeting from face to self face would help us to understand the real problem or the real issue like umm what you want to do or what it is going to be.

✓ Additionally, meeting face to face would help us understand the real problem or issue, like what you want to do or what is going to happen.

The phrase 'meeting from face to self face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'meeting face to face'. Also, 'help us to understand' can be simplified to 'help us understand'. The phrase 'what it is going to be' is vague; 'what is going to happen' is clearer.

× As I usually argue with my friends quite often, especially when we have the different sort or the different opinion.

✓ I usually argue with my friends quite often, especially when we have different kinds of opinions.

The phrase 'As I usually argue' is unnecessary and awkward. 'The different sort or the different opinion' is incorrect; it should be 'different kinds of opinions' for clarity and correctness.

× For example, when we have to find a solution for the SSI and then we have the different solutions.

✓ For example, when we have to find a solution for the issue, and we have different solutions.

'SSI' is unclear; assuming it means 'issue'. 'The different solutions' should be 'different solutions' without 'the' to match plural indefinite usage.

× So we each other saying, oh, that's mine is correct and.

✓ So we each say, 'Oh, mine is correct,' and...

The phrase 'we each other saying' is incorrect. It should be 'we each say'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammatical structure.