Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say directly that chatting with friends makes you happy and helps you relax.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Talking to them helps me forget my worries and improves my mood.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your topics. Also, avoid incorrect phrases like 'I'm sit on the Internet'.

예시: I usually chat with my friends about current events, such as sports and politics. We also discuss interesting topics we find online or in magazines.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and explain your reasons with simple, correct sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can share my ideas and learn from others. It helps me gain more experience and be more open-minded.

제안: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use clear and simple language to explain why you prefer face-to-face communication. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to express myself more clearly. Also, I can understand the other person's feelings better, which helps to strengthen our relationship.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct verb forms. Explain your opinion with simple sentences and linking words.

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe it can damage our relationship. Instead, we try to communicate in a friendly and respectful way.

× Of course chatting with my friend can make me amazing happy and give me a good emotional.

✓ Of course chatting with my friend can make me amazingly happy and give me good emotions.

The adjective 'amazing' is incorrectly used to modify 'happy'; the correct adverb form is 'amazingly'. Also, 'a good emotional' is incorrect; 'emotional' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'emotions' to fit the context.

× Worries Talking with friends is a good way to social.

✓ Talking with friends is a good way to socialise.

The sentence has a misplaced word 'Worries' and an incomplete phrase 'to social'. The correct verb is 'socialise' to express the intended meaning. The sentence should be restructured for clarity.

× I'm sit on the Internet and watch on the magazines.

✓ I sit on the Internet and read magazines.

The verb 'sit' is incorrectly used with 'I'm' and the preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'watch' and 'magazines'. The correct form is 'I sit on the Internet' and 'read magazines' without 'on'.

× Definitely I want to chat with a group of peoples be because I want to showed my wild poems and independent openness to another peoples.

✓ Definitely I want to chat with a group of people because I want to show my wild poems and independent openness to other people.

The plural of 'people' is 'people', not 'peoples' in this context. Also, 'showed' should be 'show' to match the present tense. 'Another peoples' should be 'other people'.

× Definitely I want to chat with a group of peoples be because I want to showed my wild poems and independent openness to another peoples.

✓ Definitely I want to chat with a group of people because I want to show my wild poems and independent openness to other people.

The verb 'showed' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'show'.

× I preferred to communicate face to face because in my opening, face to face can seed my openness more clearly and I can get his information in time and it can close our relation.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because, in my opinion, face to face can show my openness more clearly and I can get his information in time and it can close our relationship.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'prefer'. 'Opening' is incorrect; the correct word is 'opinion'. 'Seed' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'show'. 'Relation' should be 'relationship'.

× I preferred to communicate face to face because in my opening, face to face can seed my openness more clearly and I can get his information in time and it can close our relation.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because, in my opinion, face to face can show my openness more clearly and I can get his information in time and it can close our relationship.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'prefer'.

× In my memory it is almost not because I think argued with my friends will broke our relationship and make he hand me.

✓ In my memory, it almost never happens because I think arguing with my friends will break our relationship and hurt me.

'Argued' should be 'arguing' to function as a gerund. 'Broke' should be 'break' to match future tense after 'will'. 'Make he hand me' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'hurt me'. Also, 'it is almost not' is awkward; 'it almost never happens' is clearer.