Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态和连贯性。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Sometimes, I share interesting celebrity news to pass the time, and other times, I ask for their advice or support.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并注意句子连贯。

예시: Usually, I talk with my friends about my work and celebrity news. When I face challenges or difficulties, I also seek their support.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但可以增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

예시: It depends on the situation. If I have private problems or challenges, I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper communication.

제안: 回答结构混乱，使用了不恰当的连接词，表达不完整。建议理清思路，使用合适的连接词，并完整表达观点。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build closer friendships and reduces misunderstandings that can happen online.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用正确的时态和完整句子，并提供具体例子。

예시: Yes, when I was young, I often argued with friends about various issues. For example, we disagreed on which restaurant to go to and the date of our meetings.

× Sometimes I just want to share some interesting stories of the Daily News about celebrities to kill time sometimes I often ask some advice or support.

✓ Sometimes I just want to share some interesting stories from the Daily News about celebrities to kill time. Sometimes I often ask for some advice or support.

原句中两个句子连在一起，缺少适当的连接词或标点，导致句子结构混乱。应将其拆分为两个句子，并且“ask some advice”应改为“ask for some advice”，因为“ask”后面需要介词“for”。

× Sometimes I just want to share some interesting stories of the Daily News about celebrities to kill time sometimes I often ask some advice or support.

✓ Sometimes I just want to share some interesting stories from the Daily News about celebrities to kill time. Sometimes I often ask for some advice or support.

“stories of the Daily News”中的介词“of”用法不当，正确表达应为“stories from the Daily News”，表示“来自日报的故事”。

× Sometimes I often ask some advice or support.

✓ Sometimes I often ask for some advice or support.

动词“ask”后面需要加介词“for”来引出请求的内容，缺少“for”导致表达不完整。

× On my daily basis I usually chat with my friends about my daily work or some celebrities news.

✓ On a daily basis, I usually chat with my friends about my daily work or some celebrity news.

“On my daily basis”表达不正确，正确用法是“On a daily basis”。另外，“celebrities news”应为“celebrity news”，因为“news”是不可数名词，前面不加复数形式。

× On my daily basis I usually chat with my friends about my daily work or some celebrities news.

✓ On a daily basis, I usually chat with my friends about my daily work or some celebrity news.

“celebrities news”中“celebrities”是复数名词，修饰不可数名词“news”时应使用形容词形式“celebrity”。

× Sometimes if I face the challenging or difficulties, I also so need some support from my friends.

✓ Sometimes if I face challenges or difficulties, I also need some support from my friends.

“the challenging”用法错误，应为复数名词“challenges”。“also so need”中“so”多余，应去掉。

× Sometimes if I face the challenging or difficulties, I also so need some support from my friends.

✓ Sometimes if I face challenges or difficulties, I also need some support from my friends.

“challenging”是形容词，句中应使用名词“challenges”来表示“挑战”。

× Basing on making close friends, I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ Based on making close friends, I prefer to communicate face to face.

“Basing on”用法错误，正确表达应为“Based on”，表示“基于”。

× Basing on making close friends, I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ Based on making close friends, I prefer to communicate face to face.

“face to face”前应加连字符“face-to-face”，表示“面对面”的交流方式。

× Fourthly, I believe this way can be better to know each other well.

✓ Fourthly, I believe this way is better to get to know each other well.

“can be better to know”结构不正确，应改为“is better to get to know”，表达更自然。

× Secondly, we can avoid some mistakes on some.

✓ Secondly, we can avoid some mistakes.

句子末尾“on some”不完整且无意义，应删除。

× Yes, when I was young I often argue with friends about different problems.

✓ Yes, when I was young I often argued with friends about different problems.

描述过去的习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式“argued”，而非现在时“argue”。

× For example, previously I often argue with some decisions like which restaurants we will go.

✓ For example, previously I often argued about some decisions like which restaurants we would go to.

“argue”应使用过去式“argued”，且“argue with some decisions”表达不当，应为“argued about some decisions”。“which restaurants we will go”时态应与过去保持一致，改为“which restaurants we would go to”。

× For example, previously I often argue with some decisions like which restaurants we will go.

✓ For example, previously I often argued about some decisions like which restaurants we would go to.

“argue with some decisions”搭配错误，应为“argue about some decisions”。

× On which date we.

✓ On which date we would go.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，补充完整表达。