Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'so actually'. Also, be more specific about the programs or social media you use to make your answer richer.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through apps like WhatsApp and Instagram. It helps me stay connected with them easily.

제안: Avoid redundancy such as 'future planning plans' and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, provide more specific examples to enrich your answer.

예시: We usually chat about our life updates, such as recent events or challenges, and sometimes we discuss our future plans, like career goals or travel ideas.

제안: Try to avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use clear linking words to explain your preference and provide specific reasons to support your answer.

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to focus better and have a more meaningful conversation without distractions.

제안: Your answer is a bit repetitive and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words and complete your sentences. Provide specific reasons why face-to-face communication is better for you.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me build stronger connections, improves my communication skills, and allows me to understand emotions better through body language.

제안: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'with hers'. Be clear and concise, and explain briefly why arguments happen, using linking words for coherence.

예시: I don't argue with friends often, but sometimes we have disagreements because we have different opinions or perspectives.

× We chat always about our life updates, our problems, or maybe our, uh, future planning plans and something like that.

✓ We always chat about our life updates, our problems, or maybe our future plans and things like that.

The adverb 'always' should be placed before the main verb 'chat' to follow correct English word order. Also, 'future planning plans' is redundant; 'future plans' is clearer.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because, uh, that's helps me to be more vibrant and helps me to focus just on, uh, one person or an, uh, so that's, uh, helped me to be more connected and focusing on the right place.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because that helps me to be more vibrant and helps me to focus just on one person. So that has helped me to be more connected and focused on the right things.

The pronoun 'that's' is incorrectly used; it should be 'that' as a demonstrative pronoun without contraction. Also, verb tenses and sentence structure were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face. These are due to a lot of reasons.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face. This is due to many reasons.

'These are' is incorrect because 'reasons' is plural but the sentence refers to the explanation as a singular idea. Also, 'a lot of reasons' is better expressed as 'many reasons' for formal correctness.

× Uh, it's one of them is to be connected with, with people and with society.

✓ One of them is to be connected with people and society.

The phrase 'it's one of them is' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'One of them is'. Also, repeated 'with' is unnecessary.

× And it's also helps me to increase my communication skills and to be more connected and more with people.

✓ And it also helps me to improve my communication skills and to be more connected with people.

'It's also helps' is incorrect; it should be 'it also helps'. The phrase 'more connected and more with people' is awkward and corrected to 'more connected with people'. 'Increase' communication skills is better expressed as 'improve'.

× And also it's helped me to be.

✓ And also it has helped me to be better.

The sentence is incomplete. Adding 'better' completes the thought. Also, 'it's helped' is acceptable but 'it has helped' is clearer.

× Not a lot, but sometimes, yeah, I argue with hers.

✓ Not a lot, but sometimes, yeah, I argue with them.

The pronoun 'hers' is incorrect here; the correct object pronoun for plural friends is 'them'.