Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và ngắn gọn.

예시: I don't really enjoy chatting with my friends, but I do text them because we need to discuss our homework and assignments.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "umm". Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết mạch lạc.

예시: We usually chat about our homework and coordinate group assignments because I prefer talking face-to-face rather than chatting just for fun.

제안: Bạn cần diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am an introvert. When I have to chat in a group, I usually ask a friend to express my ideas for me.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần hoàn thiện câu cuối cùng để ý nghĩa rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ không cần thiết và kết thúc câu một cách đầy đủ.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because we can express our thoughts not only with words but also through body language and facial expressions.

제안: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và ngữ pháp đúng. Tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa như "egg you" và câu cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trình bày ý tưởng một cách đơn giản và dễ hiểu.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my friends because our opinions and lifestyles are different, and no relationship is perfect.

× So that's why we chatting.

✓ So that's why we are chatting.

The verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. Without 'are', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Most of that is discussed about our homework and coordinate group assignment.

✓ Most of that is about our homework and coordinating group assignments.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about' after it. Also, 'coordinate' should be in the gerund form 'coordinating' to function as a noun here.

× Or umm, have a talk because I think that when we are face to face our phone is better.

✓ Or umm, have a talk because I think that when we are face to face, our phones are better.

The phrase 'face to face' should be preceded by 'are' to indicate the state, and 'phone' should be plural 'phones' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. Also, a comma is needed after 'face to face' for clarity.

× Honestly, I'm not really pleased to do that because I'm really an introvert and every time that I have to chat on a group that just one of my friend, I will ask my friend to umm, express my thinking so that I don't have to touch in that group anymore.

✓ Honestly, I'm not really pleased to do that because I'm really an introvert and every time that I have to chat in a group with just one of my friends, I will ask my friend to umm, express my thinking so that I don't have to participate in that group anymore.

The phrase 'chat on a group' should be 'chat in a group'. 'Just one of my friend' should be 'just one of my friends' to indicate singular within plural. 'Touch in that group' is incorrect; 'participate in that group' is more appropriate.

× Honestly, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media of course, mostly because I think that when we meet each other in reality, we can express our thinking not just by our word but also our communication skill like.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media, of course, mostly because I think that when we meet each other in reality, we can express our thinking not just by our words but also by our communication skills.

Missing commas for clarity. 'Word' should be plural 'words'. 'Communication skill like' is incomplete and should be 'communication skills'.

× Honestly, sometimes I egg you with my friend, because in reality we have don't have a really perfect relationship so that we not have any idea umm therefore we also have some argument about our lifestyle, our thinking.

✓ Honestly, sometimes I argue with my friend, because in reality we don't have a really perfect relationship so we don't have any idea, umm, therefore we also have some arguments about our lifestyle and our thinking.

'Egg you' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'argue'. 'Have don't have' is incorrect; it should be 'don't have'. 'We not have' should be 'we don't have'. 'Argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match the context.