Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes I do. I really love chatting with my friends because I feel comfortable and relaxed because it's had no rush to respond their messages and I can take time to think about the answer and I can come.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
It depends mostly about the routine life, the their daily life. Sometimes I just want to catch up with them. Like how are you? What did you do today? How was your work? It's normal at my age right now, so it just there.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
I prefer to chat with the only one friend because it has specific topic to talk with the different people. So I decided to chat privately with some friends more than the group.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
I prefer to communicate via social media because I usually work from 8:00 AM to 4:00 PM so I don't have much energies at that time and if I should via social media, I can save my energy for myself because I'm an introverted person.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Umm, sometimes in some topics that we don't have the same perspective. For example, when I was in the university, I argue with my friend in the topic that's, uh, what was our favorite canteen at that time. And you know, we argue just that topic.
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총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และลดความซ้ำซ้อน เช่น การใช้คำเชื่อมและโครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจน เพื่อให้คำตอบกระชับและเข้าใจง่าย
예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed. I like that I can take my time to think before replying, so there is no rush in our conversations.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 60.0제안: ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และปรับปรุงความชัดเจนของประโยค รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและถูกต้อง
예시: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily routines. For example, we ask each other how our day was or how work is going. This helps us stay connected despite our busy lives.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 70.0제안: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อแสดงเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน
예시: I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because we can focus on specific topics. Therefore, I usually choose private conversations over group chats.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 75.0제안: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน
예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I work from 8 AM to 4 PM and often feel tired afterward. Since I am introverted, online communication helps me save energy.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 65.0제안: ควรลดการใช้คำเติมเต็มและปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ชัดเจน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด
예시: Sometimes, I argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, at university, we once argued about which canteen was the best, but it was just a friendly debate.
문법
× because it's had no rush to respond their messages
✓ because there is no rush to respond to their messages
The phrase 'it's had no rush' is incorrect because 'had' is the past participle and does not fit here. The correct expression is 'there is no rush' to indicate the present state. Also, 'respond their messages' lacks the preposition 'to'. (Grammar problem type ID: 9 and 11)
× respond their messages
✓ respond to their messages
The verb 'respond' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. So, it should be 'respond to their messages'. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)
× the their daily life
✓ their daily life
The phrase 'the their' is incorrect because both 'the' and 'their' are determiners and cannot be used together. The correct phrase is 'their daily life'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)
× so it just there
✓ so it is just there
The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to form the correct 'there is' structure. It should be 'so it is just there'. (Grammar problem type ID: 3)
× with the only one friend
✓ with only one friend
The phrase 'the only one friend' is incorrect because 'only one friend' does not need the definite article 'the'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)
× because it has specific topic to talk with the different people
✓ because it has a specific topic to talk about with different people
The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'specific topic' and the preposition 'about' after 'talk'. Also, 'the different people' should be 'different people' without 'the'. (Grammar problem type ID: 2 and 11 and 17)
× if I should via social media
✓ if I use social media
The phrase 'if I should via social media' is incorrect because 'should' is not used properly here. The correct form is 'if I use social media'. (Grammar problem type ID: 4)
× I don't have much energies
✓ I don't have much energy
The noun 'energy' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'energies'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1 and 14)
× I argue with my friend in the topic that's, uh, what was our favorite canteen at that time
✓ I argued with my friend about the topic of what our favorite canteen was at that time
The verb 'argue' should be in the past tense 'argued' to match the past time frame. Also, 'in the topic that's' is incorrect; it should be 'about the topic of'. (Grammar problem type ID: 5 and 26)
× I argue with my friend in the topic
✓ I argued with my friend about the topic
The correct preposition to use with 'argue' when indicating the subject is 'about', not 'in'. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)
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