Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议回答时直接回应问题，使用简单明了的句子，避免无关内容。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected and learn about their lives.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，表达不流畅，缺少连贯的连接词。建议明确主题，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供具体细节。

예시: We usually talk about food. For example, I recently discovered some new restaurants that offer amazing dishes, and I want my friends to try them too.

제안: 表达有语法错误，词汇使用不准确。建议注意语法时态和单复数，使用更准确的词汇，并且结构清晰。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am an introverted person and feel more comfortable in small groups.

제안: 表达基本清楚，但有语法和用词错误。建议注意介词使用，句子结构更自然，避免重复。

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts and asking questions than in face-to-face conversations.

제안: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和介词，表达更自然。

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe it's hard to change someone's opinion, so I prefer to listen to their thoughts.

× Yes, I want to hear what I said. No matter. I support deputy for points and I also want to know what happens at.

✓ Yes, I want to hear what I said. It doesn't matter. I support the deputy for points and I also want to know what happens.

句子结构混乱，部分表达不完整或不连贯。需要调整句子结构，使表达更清晰流畅。

× I support deputy for points and I also want to know what happens at.

✓ I support the deputy for points and I also want to know what happens.

介词“at”使用不当，句子末尾不需要“at”，应去掉。

× Uh, hi Charlie, talk about the delicious.

✓ Uh, hi Charlie, let's talk about delicious food.

代词使用不当，缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整。需要补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× For example, I just, uh, found out recently some new restaurants just offered three amazing for them.

✓ For example, I just recently found out that some new restaurants have just offered three amazing dishes for them.

形容词使用不当，“amazing”后缺少名词，且时态和语序不正确。需要补充名词并调整时态和语序。

× I want my friend to also go there to retry.

✓ I want my friend to also go there to try it.

代词使用错误，“retry”意思是“重试”，应为“try it”表示“尝试”。

× I prefer to chat with only a fan because I'm an introverted person and I don't want to get to the group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm an introverted person and I don't want to get into a group of people.

单复数错误，“a fan”应为“one friend”，介词“get to”应为“get into”。

× I mean, I do not acts in a really natural way.

✓ I mean, I do not act in a really natural way.

动词形式错误，主语“I”后动词应为原形“act”，而非“acts”。

× I prefer to communicate while social media because I just feel more comfortable in this way and I can really share my thoughts and ask the question to my friend.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I just feel more comfortable this way and I can really share my thoughts and ask questions to my friend.

介词使用错误，“while social media”应为“via social media”，且“ask the question”应为“ask questions”。

× But I cannot do this when I face to face.

✓ But I cannot do this when I am face to face.

介词使用错误，“face to face”前应加动词“am”，且不加“to”。

× I hardly do this right now because I think I cannot change a person's mind when he or she hold his or her own idea to a proper.

✓ I hardly do this right now because I think I cannot change a person's mind when he or she holds his or her own idea firmly.

情态动词和动词形式错误，“hold”应为“holds”，且“to a proper”表达不当，应改为“firmly”或类似副词。

× I just want to listen to what they think about to.

✓ I just want to listen to what they think about.

介词“to”多余，应去掉。