Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中有较多的语气词和停顿，表达不够流畅且不完整。建议减少语气词，使用完整句子，并且具体说明喜欢聊天的原因。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay updated on recent news and interesting videos we have watched.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，缺乏连贯性。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子，并举具体例子。

예시: I usually talk about interesting people I meet at work or unusual news stories I find on the Internet.

제안: 回答表达有语法错误，且语气词较多。建议使用正确的语法结构，减少语气词，并且更清楚地表达原因。

예시: To be honest, I prefer chatting with just one friend because it makes me feel safe to share my opinions without being judged.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的表达，语气词较多。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并减少语气词。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friends because I can read their facial expressions and adjust my words accordingly.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达观点，说明处理冲突的具体方法。

예시: To be honest, I usually avoid arguing with my friends. Instead, I prefer to take some time apart to calm down before discussing the issue calmly.

× Yes, I'd like to chat with my friends because, umm, they are very.

✓ Yes, I'd like to chat with my friends because, umm, they are very interesting.

句子中缺少形容词来描述friends，导致表达不完整。需要用形容词interesting来修饰friends，表示朋友们很有趣。

× It is interesting to talk with friends about the, uh, recently news and uh, uh, the videos that we saw.

✓ It is interesting to talk with friends about the recent news and the videos that we saw.

recently是副词，不能修饰名词news，应该用形容词recent来修饰news。

× I usually chat about the uh topic that uh, I recently met some weird person in my work or in the uh news on the Internet which are happened.

✓ I usually chat about the topic that I recently met some weird person at my work or in the news on the Internet which happened.

介词使用错误，工作场所应使用at my work而非in my work；news前不需要冠词the；which are happened结构错误，应为which happened。

× To be honestly, I'd rather like to chatting with just one friend because it will makes me feel safety to talk with them.

✓ To be honest, I'd rather chat with just one friend because it makes me feel safe to talk with them.

短语应为to be honest而非to be honestly；would rather后接动词原形chat，不用动名词chatting；makes主语是it，单数形式正确；safety是名词，应改为形容词safe。

× To be honestly, I'd rather like to chatting with just one friend because it will makes me feel safety to talk with them.

✓ To be honest, I'd rather chat with just one friend because it makes me feel safe to talk with them.

them指代单数friend，应该用he/she或保持them需明确复数，建议改为单数he/she或改为friends。

× I'd prefer to communicate with face to face with my friend because, umm, I can guess the feeling from their, uh, face and to, uh, change the way.

✓ I'd prefer to communicate face to face with my friend because, umm, I can guess the feeling from their face and change the way.

communicate后不需要介词with，face to face是副词短语，前面不加with；and后面不需要to。

× To be honest, if I have, uh, something bad between me and my friend, I wouldn't choose to argue with that.

✓ To be honest, if I have something bad between me and my friend, I wouldn't choose to argue about it.

argue后面搭配介词about而非with；that指代不明确，改为it更合适。

× I will. I usually I will choose. Don't, don't talk with them. This is a better, uh, ways to fix it.

✓ I usually choose not to talk with them. This is a better way to fix it.

句子结构混乱，重复使用I will和don't，需简化为I usually choose not to talk with them；ways是复数，前面用a better应改为way单数。