Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy catching up with my friends because it makes me feel more active and happy. Usually, we chat during weekends, which is a great way to relax and stay connected.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Be specific about the topics and use linking words to organize your ideas. Avoid vague phrases like 'spill the tea' without explanation.

예시: We usually talk about our future plans and share interesting stories. Sometimes, we joke around and tease each other, which helps me feel relaxed and happy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammatical errors and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

예시: I am more introverted, so I usually prefer chatting with one friend. However, depending on my mood, I sometimes enjoy group conversations because they can be more energetic and fun.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Use simple and clear sentences to express your preference. Also, explain reasons with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: In formal meetings, I find face-to-face communication a bit challenging because I feel shy. However, in informal settings, I prefer face-to-face conversations as they feel more comfortable and natural.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how you resolve arguments.

예시: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends due to misunderstandings. However, we always resolve our issues by discussing them, which helps us understand each other better over time.

× Yes, I like catching up with friends because that make a person more active and more happy chatting with friends and it was a good thing to do in weekends.

✓ Yes, I like catching up with friends because that makes a person more active and happier chatting with friends and it is a good thing to do on weekends.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that' (Singular and plural issue). Also, 'more happy' should be 'happier' to use the correct comparative form of the adjective. 'It was' is changed to 'it is' to maintain present tense consistency. 'In weekends' should be 'on weekends' as the correct preposition for days.

× Usually they chat with our friends, our future plans and sometime we spill the tea and it was fun having a usual chat with friends and we make fun of each other and that make me more chilled.

✓ Usually we chat with our friends about our future plans and sometimes we spill the tea. It is fun having a usual chat with friends and we make fun of each other and that makes me more chilled.

The subject 'they' is incorrect; it should be 'we' to match the speaker. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'It was' changed to 'it is' for present tense consistency. 'That make' should be 'that makes' to agree with singular subject 'that' (Singular and plural issue).

× Now I'm more introverted person and I love to be chat with one friend.

✓ Now I'm a more introverted person and I love to chat with one friend.

The phrase 'love to be chat' is incorrect; it should be 'love to chat' to use the correct verb form after 'love to' (Modal verb usage). Also, 'more introverted person' needs an article 'a' before it.

× I choose it's depend on my mood.

✓ I choose; it depends on my mood.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it depends' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it' (Incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement). Also, a semicolon or conjunction is needed to separate the clauses properly.

× Uh, it was a really huge party or anything else.

✓ Uh, it was a really huge party or something else.

The phrase 'or anything else' is vague and awkward here; 'or something else' is more appropriate to indicate an alternative (Sentence structure errors).

× I have a group of I want a group of friends that make more energetic or superb experience.

✓ I have a group of friends; I want a group of friends that make the experience more energetic or superb.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make more energetic' should be 'make the experience more energetic' to clarify the object. Also, 'group of' needs to be followed by 'friends' (Singular and plural issue).

× In a formal meeting I am little bit awakened to face to face communication because I am an ambient person.

✓ In a formal meeting, I am a little bit reluctant to face-to-face communication because I am an ambivert person.

'Awakened to' is incorrect; 'reluctant to' or 'uncomfortable with' is appropriate. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'Ambient person' is incorrect; likely 'ambivert person' or 'introverted person' is intended (Incorrect use of prepositions and word choice).

× I am a trouble in talking to face to face.

✓ I have trouble talking face-to-face.

'I am a trouble' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I have trouble'. Also, 'talking to face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'talking face-to-face' (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× But in a informal meeting I like to be. I like face to face conversation. It is more comfortable and I like it is more.

✓ But in an informal meeting, I like face-to-face conversation. It is more comfortable and I like it more.

'I like to be.' is incomplete and unclear. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated. 'I like it is more' is incorrect; it should be 'I like it more' (Sentence structure errors).

× Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends because of the misunderstanding. We argue and then we patch up. It was a usual thing between our best friends and it is forgetted by time and we discussed and understand each other through that little.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends because of misunderstandings. We argue and then we patch up. It is a usual thing between best friends and it is forgotten over time. We discuss and understand each other through that.

'It was' changed to 'It is' for present tense consistency. 'Forgetted' is incorrect past participle; correct form is 'forgotten' (Past tense issue). 'Misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' to generalize. 'We discussed and understand' should be 'We discuss and understand' for tense consistency.