Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Përmirësoni rrjedhshmërinë duke shmangur përsëritjet dhe duke përdorur lidhëza për të bërë përgjigjen më të natyrshme dhe më të rrjedhshme.

예시: Yes, absolutely. I chat with a few close friends almost daily, spending a big part of my day texting them or sharing relatable reels while discussing our days. Therefore, chatting with friends is a very important part of my daily routine.

제안: Përpiqu të shmang fjalët e mbushjes dhe të jepësh përgjigje më të qarta dhe më të strukturuara duke përdorur lidhëza për të lidhur idetë.

예시: I usually chat with my close friends about our daily activities. For example, I often tell them where I am going, like to work or somewhere else, and share interesting things that happened to me recently.

제안: Përmirëso strukturën duke shmangur përsëritjet dhe duke përdorur lidhëza për të bërë përgjigjen më të qartë dhe më të rrjedhshme.

예시: It depends, but usually I communicate daily with just one friend. However, if the topic involves several people, I enjoy chatting in a group chat as well.

제안: Përpiqu të përdorësh fjalë më të sakta dhe të shmangësh përsëritjet për të bërë përgjigjen më të natyrshme dhe më të rrjedhshme.

예시: It depends, but of course, face-to-face communication with friends is the best option. However, since we often live far apart and have work commitments, social media is usually the only way we can stay in touch.

제안: Përmirëso përdorimin e fjalëve dhe strukturën e përgjigjes për të qenë më i qartë dhe më i rrjedhshëm.

예시: I wouldn't say we argue often, but sometimes we have discussions when we disagree. However, these conversations don't lead to hard feelings between us.

× I have a few close friends which I chat almost on the daily so a big part of my day is just texting them or sending them reels, relatable ones and talking about our days.

✓ I have a few close friends whom I chat with almost daily, so a big part of my day is just texting them or sending them reels, relatable ones, and talking about our days.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for people; 'whom' is the correct pronoun when referring to people as the object of the verb. Also, 'chat almost on the daily' is awkward; 'chat with almost daily' is more natural. Including 'with' after 'chat' is necessary because 'chat' is an intransitive verb that requires a preposition when indicating the person spoken to.

× I have a few close friends which I chat almost on the daily so a big part of my day is just texting them or sending them reels, relatable ones and talking about our days.

✓ I have a few close friends whom I chat with almost daily, so a big part of my day is just texting them or sending them reels, relatable ones, and talking about our days.

The phrase 'chat almost on the daily' is incorrect because 'chat' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating the person you are talking to. Also, 'on the daily' is informal and awkward; 'almost daily' is more appropriate.

× Well, as I said, I have a few close friends that I chat every day almost.

✓ Well, as I said, I have a few close friends that I chat with almost every day.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating the person you are talking to. Also, 'every day almost' is awkward; 'almost every day' is the correct adverbial phrase.

× Well, as I said, I have a few close friends that I chat every day almost.

✓ Well, as I said, I have a few close friends that I chat with almost every day.

The verb 'chat' is intransitive and requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the person you are talking to. Omitting 'with' is incorrect.

× So where, where is I'm going to work or I am going somewhere.

✓ So, for example, when I'm going to work or going somewhere,

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'So where, where is I'm going to work or I am going somewhere' is ungrammatical and confusing. Rephrasing to 'So, for example, when I'm going to work or going somewhere,' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I am always texting one of my best friends and like, this thing happened to me, right?

✓ I am always texting one of my best friends, like, 'This thing happened to me,' right?

Adding commas and quotation marks clarifies the sentence. The phrase 'like, this thing happened to me' is informal but acceptable; punctuation improves clarity.

× Mostly I communicate with one friend only on the daily basis.

✓ Mostly, I communicate with only one friend on a daily basis.

The phrase 'on the daily basis' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on a daily basis.' Also, 'one friend only' is better expressed as 'only one friend' for natural word order.

× But if we are discussing something that involves a group of people or we are talking in a group of friends then yes I like to speak in a in a group group chat.

✓ But if we are discussing something that involves a group of people or we are talking in a group of friends, then yes, I like to speak in a group chat.

The phrase 'in a group group chat' has a repeated word 'group.' Also, 'talking in a group of friends' is awkward; 'talking with a group of friends' or 'in a group chat' is better. Adding commas improves readability.

× But usually no. I just like to speak with one person 1 friend.

✓ But usually no. I just like to speak with one person, one friend.

Using '1' as a numeral in formal speech is inappropriate; spelling out 'one' is correct. Also, 'one person one friend' is redundant; choosing one term is better, but if both are used, a comma is needed.

× That also depends. I mean, of course that communicating face to face with our friends is the best option there is, but that is not always possible because we are working and we live far from each other.

✓ That also depends. I mean, of course, communicating face to face with our friends is the best option there is, but that is not always possible because we are working and live far from each other.

The phrase 'we live far from each other' is correct, but removing the repeated subject 'we' in 'we are working and we live' improves fluency. Also, adding commas after 'I mean' and 'of course' improves clarity.

× So that's the only option that remains is talking through social media and that's the best that we can get.

✓ So that's the only option that remains: talking through social media, and that's the best we can get.

Using a colon after 'remains' introduces the explanation properly. Also, removing 'that' before 'we can get' is more natural. Adding a comma before 'and' improves sentence flow.

× I would say arguably is a big word, but of course we get into discussions over things that we don't agree upon.

✓ I would say 'arguing' is a big word, but of course we get into discussions over things that we don't agree upon.

The word 'arguably' is an adverb meaning 'possibly,' but the intended word is 'arguing,' a verb. Using the correct word clarifies meaning.

× That doesn't necessarily mean that we're arguing or have hard feelings between each other.

✓ That doesn't necessarily mean that we're arguing or have hard feelings towards each other.

The phrase 'between each other' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'towards' or 'with' when referring to feelings directed at one another.