Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding unnecessary questions and redundant phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of asking "Is that OK?", just state your preference clearly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated about their lives. Even if we don't talk every day, I try to communicate with them at least twice a month to keep our friendship strong.

제안: Your answer covers different topics, which is good, but try to organize your ideas with linking words and be more specific. Also, avoid contradictory statements like "mostly about our love life, though we do not have one."

예시: We usually chat about the highlights of our month, such as work and daily activities. Sometimes, we also share funny stories about our love lives, even though most of us are single, just to have a good laugh.

제안: Try to improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, correct word choice like "blightens" should be "brightens."

예시: Since I am an introvert, I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels more comfortable. However, chatting with a group can also brighten my mood since I get to know what my friends have been experiencing lately.

제안: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and use correct sentence structures. Avoid unclear phrases like "I can order it."

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media because my friends and I live far apart. This way, we can easily stay in touch despite the distance.

제안: Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise. Also, clarify your meaning by rephrasing awkward expressions like "being a people pleaser."

예시: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I value our relationship and prefer to keep things peaceful. Besides, we rarely have disagreements that lead to arguments.

× Like even just a month, I want to chat with them.

✓ Even if it's just once a month, I want to chat with them.

The original sentence lacks clarity and correct tense usage. 'Like even just a month' is awkward and unclear. Using 'Even if it's just once a month' correctly expresses the intended frequency in present tense.

× I want to communicate with them at least two times.

✓ I want to communicate with them at least twice.

The phrase 'two times' is grammatically correct but less natural than 'twice' when referring to frequency. Using 'twice' is more concise and idiomatic in English.

× I love knowing how their day went.

✓ I love knowing how their day goes.

The question is about general preference, so present tense is appropriate. 'Went' is past tense, but 'goes' fits better to express habitual or general actions.

× We just wanted to laugh.

✓ We just want to laugh.

The sentence refers to a current or habitual action, so present tense 'want' is appropriate instead of past tense 'wanted'. Also, 'we' is correct pronoun usage here.

× I being an introvert, I only, I prefer to chat with only one friend, whoever.

✓ Being an introvert, I prefer to chat with only one friend, whoever that may be.

The phrase 'I being an introvert' is incorrect; it should be 'Being an introvert'. Also, 'I only, I prefer' is redundant and awkward. Adding 'that may be' clarifies 'whoever'.

× It is also comforting and it blightens my mood to chat with a group of people because I have a lot of friends and I wanted to know what they've been through right now.

✓ It is also comforting and it brightens my mood to chat with a group of people because I have a lot of friends and I want to know what they've been through recently.

The word 'blightens' is incorrect; the correct word is 'brightens'. Also, 'I wanted' should be 'I want' to maintain present tense. 'Right now' is better replaced with 'recently' for clarity.

× I don't really know what my preference about this, but I considering that we are far we have we're distance apart from my friends.

✓ I don't really know what my preference is about this, but considering that we are far apart from my friends,

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'I considering' should be 'considering'. 'We have we're distance apart' is incorrect; it should be 'we are far apart'. Also, 'preference about this' needs 'is' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to have it in social media because I can order it.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I can use it anytime.

'Have it in social media' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communicate via social media'. 'I can order it' is unclear and likely a misuse; 'I can use it anytime' is more appropriate.

× I don't being a people pleaser, I don't.

✓ I'm not a people pleaser, so I don't.

'I don't being' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not'. The sentence is better structured with 'so I don't' to connect the ideas clearly.

× I don't want to have complications.

✓ I don't want to have complications.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× I don't want to complicate my relationship with my friends so I don't argue with them.

✓ I don't want to complicate my relationships with my friends, so I don't argue with them.

'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple friends. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence clarity.

× And so also we do not really have something to argue about.

✓ Also, we do not really have anything to argue about.

'And so also' is redundant; 'Also' suffices. 'Something' should be 'anything' in negative sentences.