Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Since we don't have much time to meet face to face, we usually text or call each other on social media to stay in touch.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lỗi từ vựng như 'stock' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cụ thể hơn, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: We usually chat about our daily lives, sharing stories about what happened during the day, funny moments, and supporting each other even when we are apart.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều/số ít (friends -> friend) và cấu trúc câu để tránh lặp từ như 'my idea in my opinion'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: As an introvert, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing my ideas in a smaller setting.

제안: Câu trả lời hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'spread my feelings'. Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn và chia câu hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me express my feelings and thoughts more clearly. I also feel more comfortable and less pressured when I meet someone in person.

제안: Bạn đã dùng từ sai (acute, acumen) và câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

예시: We usually avoid arguments to keep our friendship healthy. However, if we do have a disagreement, it can be serious and we might not talk for a week or even a month.

× we don't have really much time to meet on person like meeting face to face

✓ we don't really have much time to meet in person like meeting face to face

The phrase 'really much time' is incorrect; the adverb 'really' should precede 'have' and 'much' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns like 'time'. Also, 'on person' should be 'in person' as the correct preposition for meeting someone physically.

× So we decided to text and call on social media to communicate easier

✓ So we decided to text and call via social media to communicate more easily

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'via' is appropriate for indicating the medium of communication. Also, 'communicate easier' should be 'communicate more easily' because 'easily' is an adverb modifying the verb 'communicate' and requires 'more' for comparative form.

× We chat about a lot of stock

✓ We chat about a lot of stuff

The word 'stock' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'stuff' to refer to various topics or things informally.

× we always share about the stories and what happened in a day and what's funny, what is not

✓ we always share stories about what happened in a day and what's funny, what is not

The verb 'share' does not require the preposition 'about' when followed directly by the object. Also, 'in a day' is acceptable but 'during the day' or 'in the day' is more natural; however, the main issue is the unnecessary 'about' after 'share'.

× I find it easier to chat with only one friends because I'm kind of afraid of talking or sharing my idea in my opinion to a group of people

✓ I find it easier to chat with only one friend because I'm kind of afraid of talking or sharing my ideas or opinions to a group of people

The word 'friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to 'one'. Also, 'idea in my opinion' is awkward; it should be 'ideas or opinions' to express multiple thoughts.

× I find it easier and more convenient to communicate face to face so I can spread my feelings, my thoughts clearly

✓ I find it easier and more convenient to communicate face to face so I can express my feelings and my thoughts clearly

The verb 'spread' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'express' when talking about communicating feelings and thoughts.

× We don't normally acute like we always keep their friendship healthy

✓ We don't normally argue; we always keep our friendship healthy

The word 'acute' is incorrect; the intended word is 'argue'. Also, 'their friendship' should be 'our friendship' to match the subject 'we'.

× like we avoid acumen

✓ like we avoid arguments

The word 'acumen' is incorrect; the intended word is 'arguments' to fit the context of avoiding conflicts.

× but whenever we got an argument, it's gonna be really big argument and we will never talk for a week or even a month

✓ but whenever we get an argument, it's going to be a really big argument and we will not talk for a week or even a month

The verb 'got' should be present tense 'get' to match the habitual action indicated by 'whenever'. Also, 'gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred. 'Never talk' is better as 'not talk' in this context.