Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung tốt, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như thêm chủ ngữ trong câu "when have someone listen to me" nên là "when I have someone listen to me". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax. I usually spend hours talking with my best friends about my daily activities and memorable experiences. Moreover, I feel supported and connected when I have someone who listens to me attentively.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi nhưng câu trả lời hơi ngắn và chưa sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm ví dụ hoặc giải thích cụ thể hơn về các chủ đề bạn thường nói và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: To be honest, we talk about a wide range of topics, but the most common one is family matters. For instance, my best friend often gives me useful advice that helps me solve problems within my family, which I really appreciate.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng giới từ, ví dụ "face with personal problems" nên là "face personal problems". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: It depends. When I have something exciting to share, I prefer chatting with a group of people because the more, the merrier. It's fun to celebrate together. However, when I face personal problems, I usually turn to my best friend for thoughtful advice.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời rất tốt với ví dụ cụ thể và từ vựng phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý đến cách dùng mạo từ, ví dụ "the face to face communication" nên là "face-to-face communication" hoặc "face-to-face communication is better". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu kết để làm câu trả lời hoàn chỉnh hơn.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to understand each other better through body language and facial expressions. For example, it's easier to tell if someone is happy or confused in person, which is hard to detect via social media. Therefore, I find face-to-face interactions more effective.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung tốt và thể hiện sự phát triển cá nhân. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ "before reaction" nên là "before reacting". Bạn cũng có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I used to argue with my best friend when I was younger because I misunderstood her perspective and didn't give her a chance to explain. As a result, I felt really regretful. However, now I have become more patient and try to listen carefully before reacting.

× I usually spend hours to talk with my best friends about my daily activities or some memorable experiences in my life.

✓ I usually spend hours talking with my best friends about my daily activities or some memorable experiences in my life.

The verb 'spend' is followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, not the infinitive 'to talk'. Therefore, 'to talk' should be corrected to 'talking'.

× I feel really supported and connected when have someone listen to me.

✓ I feel really supported and connected when I have someone listen to me.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'have'. Every clause needs a subject, so 'when have someone listen to me' should be 'when I have someone listen to me'.

× Sometimes my best friend gives me useful advice to help me address my family problems.

✓ Sometimes my best friend gives me useful advice to help me with my family problems.

The verb 'help' is commonly followed by the preposition 'with' when referring to dealing with problems. Therefore, 'address my family problems' should be 'help me with my family problems'.

× It depends when I have something exciting to share, I would like to do this with a group of people because the more the merrier.

✓ It depends; when I have something exciting to share, I would like to do this with a group of people because the more the merrier.

The sentence is a run-on and needs proper punctuation. Adding a semicolon or period after 'It depends' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× However, when I face with personal problems, I just ask my best friend to support me by giving thoughtful advice.

✓ However, when I face personal problems, I just ask my best friend to support me by giving thoughtful advice.

The verb 'face' does not require the preposition 'with'. The phrase should be 'face personal problems' instead of 'face with personal problems'.

× I can see the face to face communication is better because we can easily understand each other through body language and facial expressions.

✓ I can see that face-to-face communication is better because we can easily understand each other through body language and facial expressions.

The phrase 'face to face communication' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face communication' and preceded by 'that' to connect the clauses properly.

× For example, we can recognize each other that a person is happy or confused, which is difficult to know via social media.

✓ For example, we can recognize from each other when a person is happy or confused, which is difficult to know via social media.

The phrase 'recognize each other that' is incorrect. It should be 'recognize from each other when' to correctly express the idea of perceiving emotions.

× But now I become more patient and try to listen carefully before reaction.

✓ But now I have become more patient and try to listen carefully before reacting.

The verb 'become' should be in the present perfect tense 'have become' to indicate a change up to now. Also, 'before reaction' is incorrect; it should be 'before reacting' using the gerund form after 'before'.