Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và ngắn gọn, ví dụ: "Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps us strengthen our bonds and understand each other better."

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps us strengthen our bonds and understand each other better.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: "I usually chat with my friends about schoolwork, such as homework, teacher assignments, or presentations. Besides that, we also discuss our hobbies, like playing games or planning to hang out together."

예시: I usually chat with my friends about schoolwork, such as homework, teacher assignments, or presentations. Besides that, we also discuss our hobbies, like playing games or planning to hang out together.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp. Ví dụ: "I prefer chatting one-on-one because group chats can sometimes lead to arguments or be overwhelming for me."

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because group chats can sometimes lead to arguments or be overwhelming for me.

제안: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời và dùng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ: "As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to keep in touch without worrying about my appearance."

예시: As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to keep in touch without worrying about my appearance.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ: "I rarely argue with friends, but sometimes misunderstandings happen online because it's hard to reach an agreement."

예시: I rarely argue with friends, but sometimes misunderstandings happen online because it's hard to reach an agreement.

× Chatting with friends is an opportunity for me to communicate bonds and understand more for about each other.

✓ Chatting with friends is an opportunity for me to build bonds and understand more about each other.

The phrase 'communicate bonds' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'build bonds'. Also, 'understand more for about each other' contains redundant prepositions; the correct preposition is 'about'. This improves clarity and correctness.

× I usually chat with my friends about school works such as homeworks, teachers assignment or presentation UMM.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about school work such as homework, teachers' assignments, or presentations.

'School works' should be 'school work' as 'work' is uncountable here. 'Homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is uncountable. 'Teachers assignment' should be plural possessive 'teachers' assignments'. 'Presentation' should be plural 'presentations' to match the list.

× We also talk about hobbies like playing games or hanging out with each other like planning umm.

✓ We also talk about hobbies like playing games or hanging out together, like planning activities.

The phrase 'hanging out with each other like planning umm' is awkward. 'Hanging out together' is better. Also, 'like planning umm' is unclear; adding 'activities' clarifies the meaning.

× I personally prefer chat with only individual for explain.

✓ I personally prefer to chat with only an individual, for example.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to chat'. 'Only individual' needs an article 'an individual'. 'For explain' is incorrect; 'for example' is the correct phrase.

× Chatting in groups may lead to algum argument or sometimes too annoying for me, but.

✓ Chatting in groups may lead to some arguments or sometimes be too annoying for me.

'Algum' is a Portuguese word and incorrect here; it should be 'some'. The sentence ends with 'but' without continuation, which is incorrect. Removing 'but' completes the sentence properly.

× I'm technically an introvert person, so I would like to choose contact with friends or other people via social media.

✓ I'm technically an introverted person, so I would like to contact friends or other people via social media.

'Introvert person' should be 'introverted person'. 'Choose contact with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'contact friends' without 'choose' or 'to contact'.

× By this way I could keep in touch with them without caring too much about my appearance or.

✓ In this way, I can keep in touch with them without caring too much about my appearance.

'By this way' should be 'In this way'. The sentence ends with 'or' without continuation, which is incorrect and should be removed.

× I'm really argue with someone, especially through Internet.

✓ I rarely argue with someone, especially through the Internet.

'I'm really argue' is incorrect; 'I rarely argue' fits better. Also, 'through Internet' needs the definite article 'the Internet'.

× Explain. For explain I go to Internet is kind of complicated and it's not it's hard to have a consensus between.

✓ Let me explain. Using the Internet is kind of complicated, and it's hard to reach a consensus.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Explain. For explain I go to Internet' is incorrect; rephrasing to 'Let me explain. Using the Internet...' improves clarity. 'It's not it's hard' is redundant; corrected to 'it's hard'. 'Have a consensus between' is incomplete; 'reach a consensus' is correct.