Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say "Yes, I do. Sometimes we hang out to catch up on each other's lives."

예시: Yes, I do. Sometimes we hang out to catch up on each other's lives.

제안: Improve your sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I usually chat with my friends about our lives, how things are going, and sometimes about visa matters."

예시: I usually chat with my friends about our lives, how things are going, and sometimes about visa matters.

제안: Focus on correct grammar and sentence order. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. For example, "I prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't have many friends, and sometimes I want to discuss private matters, so I feel more comfortable talking one-on-one."

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't have many friends, and sometimes I want to discuss private matters, so I feel more comfortable talking one-on-one.

제안: Use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Add linking words for coherence. For example, "I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand feelings clearly. On social media, it's hard to read emotions since you can't see facial expressions."

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand feelings clearly. On social media, it's hard to read emotions since you can't see facial expressions.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to explain reasons logically. For example, "Yes, I do argue with friends because everyone has their own reasons and beliefs. Therefore, misunderstandings can happen, leading to arguments."

예시: Yes, I do argue with friends because everyone has their own reasons and beliefs. Therefore, misunderstandings can happen, leading to arguments.

× Yes I do sometime we hang out together for updating our life.

✓ Yes, I do. Sometimes we hang out together to update our lives.

The original sentence has issues with adverb placement and verb form. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'For updating' is incorrect; the infinitive 'to update' is appropriate here. Also, 'our life' should be plural 'our lives' to match the plural subject.

× I usually chat with my friend about our life, how is going on in our life and also about visa.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our lives, how things are going in our lives, and also about visas.

The sentence has singular/plural inconsistency and incorrect word order. 'My friend' should be 'my friends' to match usual plural usage. 'Our life' should be 'our lives'. The phrase 'how is going on in our life' is incorrect; it should be 'how things are going in our lives'. 'Visa' should be plural 'visas' if referring generally.

× I do prefer about chatting only one friend because I don't have a lot of friends in my life and also sometime I need to chat about my privacy so I feel more comfortable to talk with my friend only one.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't have a lot of friends, and sometimes I need to chat about my privacy, so I feel more comfortable talking with just one friend.

The phrase 'prefer about chatting' is incorrect; 'prefer chatting' or 'prefer to chat' is correct. 'Only one friend' should be 'with only one friend'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Talk with my friend only one' is awkward; 'talking with just one friend' is better.

× I do prefer to communicate face to face because it's control the feeling clearly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it controls the feelings clearly.

'It's control' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it', so 'it controls' is correct. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context.

× Sometimes when you talk on social media you cannot guess the feeling or the eyes cannot show the feeling to know how that feel.

✓ Sometimes when you talk on social media, you cannot guess the feelings, and the eyes cannot show the feelings to know how someone feels.

'Guess the feeling' should be 'guess the feelings' for plural consistency. 'The eyes cannot show the feeling' is awkward; better to say 'the eyes cannot show the feelings'. 'How that feel' is incorrect; it should be 'how someone feels'.

× Yes I do because everyone have the own reason and everyone believe themselves.

✓ Yes, I do because everyone has their own reasons and everyone believes in themselves.

'Everyone' is singular and requires singular verbs: 'has' and 'believes'. 'The own reason' should be 'their own reasons' to match plural sense. 'Believe themselves' should be 'believes in themselves' for correct verb and preposition.

× So it's common that two people talk together and then don't understand each other and then arguing.

✓ So it's common that two people talk together, then don't understand each other, and then argue.

The sentence lacks a proper verb after 'and then'; 'arguing' is a present participle and does not fit here. It should be the base verb 'argue' to maintain parallel structure with previous verbs.