Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达情感和原因。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and relieve stress. We often share funny stories from our daily lives, which strengthens our friendship.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，词汇重复，内容不够具体。建议理清句子结构，避免重复，并具体说明聊天内容。

예시: I usually talk about my daily life, funny stories, entertainment, games, and sometimes the weather with my friends.

제안: 回答中有重复和表达不清的问题，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并清晰表达不同情境下的偏好。

예시: It depends on the situation. For private topics, I prefer chatting with one close friend. But for funny stories, I like talking with a group so we can all share and enjoy together.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意语法结构，使用更地道的表达方式，并明确区分不同沟通方式的适用场景。

예시: It depends on the situation. For intimate or confidential conversations, I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us connect emotionally. For casual chats, social media is fine.

제안: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇，并清楚表达争吵的原因和结果。

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have disagreements. However, I usually apologize and explain my reasons, which helps us become closer.

× It is a relaxable way to help me to, uh, leave my pressures and also share the daily funny things with with each other can also promote our relationships and enhance our friendships.

✓ It is a relaxing way to help me, uh, relieve my pressures and also share daily funny things with each other, which can also promote our relationships and enhance our friendships.

“relaxable”不是正确的形容词，应该用“relaxing”表示令人放松的。句子中“leave my pressures”表达不准确，应该用“relieve my pressures”表示缓解压力。句子结构混乱，需用“which”引导定语从句，连接前后内容。

× I usually chat about with friends, it's my daily life and some humor story like the entertainment entertainment games we usually talk about some the weather and the funny story happening in our life.

✓ I usually chat with friends about my daily life and some humorous stories like entertainment games. We usually talk about the weather and funny stories happening in our lives.

“chat about with friends”中“about”位置错误，应为“chat with friends about”。“humor story”应为复数“humorous stories”，且“humorous”是形容词。句中“some the weather”错误，去掉“the”。“in our life”应为复数“in our lives”。

× For example, when talking about some private private topic I prefer talking only one person, one one in imitate friends.

✓ For example, when talking about some private topics, I prefer talking to only one person, one intimate friend.

“private private topic”重复且“topic”应为复数“topics”。“talking only one person”缺少介词，应为“talking to only one person”。“imitate friends”应为“intimate friend”，且“friend”单数。

× I think I prefer communicate face to face which can make our emotion connected.

✓ I think I prefer to communicate face to face, which can make our emotions connected.

“prefer communicate”缺少不定式“to”，应为“prefer to communicate”。“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。句中逗号缺失，需在“face to face”后加逗号。

× When have some normal or basic conversations via social media is OK.

✓ Having some normal or basic conversations via social media is OK.

句子缺少主语，应该用动名词短语“Having some normal or basic conversations”作主语。

× Yes sometimes, sometimes I argue with friends when we have some contraction or sounds even but not not have fight when we have argue.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends when we have some contradictions or disagreements, but we do not fight when we argue.

“contraction”用词错误，应为“contradictions”表示矛盾。“sounds even”表达不清，改为“disagreements”。“not not have fight”语法错误，应为“do not fight”。“have argue”错误，应为“argue”。

× I was the one who always say I'm sorry and explain why I do this argue sometimes made me closer.

✓ I am the one who always says I'm sorry and explains why I do this. Arguing sometimes makes me closer to them.

时态应为现在时，“was”改为“am”。“say”应为第三人称单数“says”。“explain”同理改为“explains”。“do this argue”表达错误，改为“do this”。“argue”作为动名词时应改为“arguing”。“made me closer”时态和表达不当，改为“makes me closer to them”。