Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'friend'는 복수형 'friends'로 수정하고, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

예시: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress and feel connected.

제안: 내용이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 'boyfriend'는 복수형 'boyfriends'로 수정하고, 문장을 더 구체적이고 논리적으로 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 'I usually talk about my boyfriend with my friends, especially when we have disagreements, so I can get advice or support.'

예시: I usually talk about my boyfriend with my friends, especially when we have disagreements, so I can get advice or support.

제안: 문장이 어색하고 중복이 있습니다. 'group people' 대신 'a group of people'를 사용하고, 문장을 명확하게 정리하세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can share more ideas compared to chatting with just one friend.'

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can share more ideas compared to chatting with just one friend.

제안: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'when I me my friend'는 'when I meet my friend'로 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it's more engaging and I can read my friend's expressions.'

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it's more engaging and I can read my friend's expressions.

제안: 문장이 길고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'understanding'은 'understand'로 수정하고, 문장을 간결하게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'We sometimes argue playfully, but we usually understand each other's feelings, so serious arguments are rare.'

예시: We sometimes argue playfully, but we usually understand each other's feelings, so serious arguments are rare.

× I really love chatting with friend because even I'm talking personally.

✓ I really love chatting with friends because even when I'm talking personally.

'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the context implies chatting with more than one person. Also, 'even I'm talking personally' is corrected to 'even when I'm talking personally' for grammatical correctness.

× So I really love to talking with people.

✓ So I really love talking with people.

After 'love', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. 'to talking' is incorrect; it should be 'talking'.

× Also, I can relieve stress by that.

✓ Also, I can relieve stress by that activity.

The phrase 'by that' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'activity' clarifies the meaning and corrects the prepositional phrase.

× I usually chat about my boyfriend with my friend since we have boyfriend.

✓ I usually chat about my boyfriend with my friends since we have boyfriends.

'friend' and 'boyfriend' should be plural 'friends' and 'boyfriends' because the context implies multiple friends and their respective boyfriends.

× For example, if we argue with my boyfriend, I can share to my friend or and can I can read it.

✓ For example, if I argue with my boyfriend, I can share it with my friends or I can read it.

'share to my friend' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'share with my friends'. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Umm I prefer chat with group people because I used to like chat with only one friend because it can be more focus each other.

✓ Umm I prefer chatting with groups of people because I used to like chatting with only one friend since it allows more focus on each other.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in gerund form 'chatting'. 'group people' is corrected to 'groups of people'. 'more focus each other' is corrected to 'more focus on each other'.

× But after I grew up I I can we can share more.

✓ But after I grew up, I think we can share more.

The original sentence is unclear and has repetition. Adding 'think' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I would definitely say face to face because when I me my friend in person we can be more focused on our chatting and more fun but when I on social media I cannot read her.

✓ I would definitely say face to face because when I meet my friend in person, we can be more focused on our chatting and have more fun, but when I am on social media, I cannot read her.

'I me my friend' is corrected to 'I meet my friend'. 'when I on social media' is corrected to 'when I am on social media'. Added commas for clarity.

× Not really, we can argue for fun sometimes but I don't really fight and argue with my friend because they really understanding how I feel and understanding how they are too so we don't argument.

✓ Not really, we can argue for fun sometimes but I don't really fight and argue with my friends because they really understand how I feel and understand how they feel too, so we don't argue seriously.

'my friend' changed to 'my friends' for plural consistency. 'they really understanding' corrected to 'they really understand'. 'we don't argument' corrected to 'we don't argue seriously' for grammatical correctness.