Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors and run-on sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay updated on their lives. Since some of us are busy with work and college, we don't meet often, so chatting keeps our friendship strong.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas better and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and be more specific in your descriptions.

예시: We usually chat about our daily lives, such as work updates, college activities, and our hobbies. For example, I often share my experiences at college, and my friends talk about their interests.

제안: Good answer with clear reasons and an example. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more fluent and natural.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because it offers a wider range of topics and makes the conversation more lively. For instance, my close group of four friends often share different opinions and stories, which keeps our discussions interesting.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words and correct expressions to make your answer clearer and more natural.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I'm quite old-fashioned and don't use social media much. Meeting people in person allows me to use gestures and body language, which helps me understand them better.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some minor errors and filler words. Try to avoid fillers and improve sentence structure for clarity and fluency.

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I prefer to maintain peaceful and harmonious relationships. Although we have different opinions sometimes, I accept them without conflict.

× I do love chatting with friends, I love to catch up with my friends anytime and I would like to know what's actually happening in their lives Since we are all in our college life, some of them are working and we don't get to meet each other as much as.

✓ I do love chatting with friends. I love to catch up with my friends anytime, and I would like to know what's actually happening in their lives. Since we are all in our college life, some of them are working, and we don't get to meet each other as much.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions to separate independent clauses. Breaking it into shorter sentences and adding commas improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× We usually keep each other updated on our daily lives, what's going on in our company, what's up, what am I offer in college and umm we share about our hobby we also talk about.

✓ We usually keep each other updated on our daily lives, what's going on in our company, what's up, what I am offered in college, and we also share about our hobbies and talk about other things.

The sentence contains awkward phrasing and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'What am I offer' is incorrect; it should be 'what I am offered'. Also, 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' to match the context. Adding conjunctions and commas improves sentence flow and correctness.

× I personally prefer chatting with a group because it allows to explore more dynamic range of subjects and it adds much energy to the conversation.

✓ I personally prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to explore a more dynamic range of subjects and it adds much energy to the conversation.

The phrase 'it allows to explore' is missing the object pronoun 'me'. The verb 'allow' requires an object before the infinitive verb. Adding 'me' corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer to communicate via face to face because I'm quite a old fashioned person and I don't really use social media a lot and I love to meet people in person and to talk with them using gestures, body languages and to understand more deeper and it helps.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I'm quite an old-fashioned person and I don't really use social media a lot. I love to meet people in person, talk with them using gestures and body language, and understand more deeply, which helps.

'Via face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' is an adverbial phrase and does not need 'via'. 'A old fashioned' should be 'an old-fashioned' because 'old' starts with a vowel sound. 'Body languages' should be 'body language' as it is uncountable. 'More deeper' is redundant; 'deeper' alone suffices. The sentence is also too long and benefits from being split for clarity.

× I don't argue your lot.

✓ I don't argue a lot.

'Your lot' is incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is 'a lot' meaning frequently. Replacing 'your lot' with 'a lot' corrects the pronoun misuse.