Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your response concise within 5 sentences. Also, use linking words to improve coherence, for example, 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my best friends because we often discuss common interests and share opinions on various topics. This helps us understand each other better and strengthens our friendship. Overall, these conversations are always fun and relaxing.

제안: Good content and structure, but watch your grammar (e.g., 'both preparing' should be 'are both preparing'). Also, use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Currently, my friend and I are both preparing for our weddings next year, so we usually chat about wedding planning. We share information about different ceremonies, vendors, and the costs involved. Therefore, exchanging ideas helps us make better decisions.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains a small grammar mistake ('one friends' should be 'one friend'). Also, avoid filler phrases like 'kind of' to sound more confident. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' effectively.

예시: Actually, I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because I often feel mentally exhausted in groups. So, one-on-one conversations are easier and more enjoyable as I can focus better and feel more comfortable.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammar and word choice errors ('when I when talking', 'confused or healthy' likely meant 'confused or unwell'). Try to proofread and use precise vocabulary. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language, which are important for understanding emotions. For example, when talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is confused or unwell, which is difficult through social media.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammar mistakes and unclear phrases ('maintaining like harmony', 'discuss problems commonly', 'listen about her or his'). Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I usually try to avoid arguing with my friends because it can be stressful and harm our relationship. I believe maintaining harmony is important, so I prefer to discuss problems calmly rather than argue. Also, I try to listen carefully to their opinions.

× Actually, I prefer chatting with just one friends rather than a group.

✓ Actually, I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group.

The word 'friends' is plural, but 'one' indicates singular. Therefore, 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match the singular subject 'one'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Currently, my friend and I both preparing for our weddings next year, so we usually chat about wedding planning.

✓ Currently, my friend and I are both preparing for our weddings next year, so we usually chat about wedding planning.

The verb 'preparing' needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. The preposition 'both' should be placed after the auxiliary verb. This is an incorrect use of verb form and sentence structure.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language which are important for understanding emotions and intentions.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language which are important for understanding emotions and intentions.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb. This is a prepositional phrase usage issue.

× For example, when I when talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is confused or healthy, which is difficult through social media.

✓ For example, when I am talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is confused or healthy, which is difficult through social media.

The phrase 'when I when talking' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am talking' to form the present continuous tense. This is an incorrect use of verb form and pronouns.

× For example, when I when talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is confused or healthy, which is difficult through social media.

✓ For example, when I am talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is confused or unwell, which is difficult through social media.

The adjective 'healthy' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective to describe someone not feeling well is 'unwell' or 'ill'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× I believe that maintaining like harmony is important, so I prefer to discuss problems commonly rather than argue.

✓ I believe that maintaining harmony is important, so I prefer to discuss problems calmly rather than argue.

The word 'like' is unnecessary before 'harmony' and should be removed. Also, 'commonly' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'calmly' to describe how problems are discussed. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and adverbs.

× Or I just try to listen about her or his.

✓ Or I just try to listen to her or him.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also, 'his' should be 'him' as the object pronoun. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and pronouns.