Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some unclear phrases and filler words like 'Charlie Wood' and 'UMM' which affect clarity. Try to avoid unnecessary fillers and unclear words to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, keep your sentences concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends is a great way for me to relax and unwind after a tiring day. I usually seek emotional support and enjoy connecting with them during our conversations.

제안: Your answer covers the topic but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing such as 'I normally is take the role'. Also, avoid redundancy and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Focus on clear sentence structure and relevant vocabulary.

예시: Honestly, we chat about everything, from schoolwork and hobbies to weekend plans. I usually take the role of an active communicator, sharing my feelings and thoughts rather than just listening.

제안: Good answer with clear structure and relevant examples. To improve, try to use more linking words and vary your vocabulary to make your response more natural and engaging. Also, correct minor grammar issues like 'an upcoming exams' should be 'an upcoming exam'.

예시: I think it depends on the situation. For instance, when preparing for an upcoming exam, I prefer chatting with a group to get different perspectives. However, for more personal or sensitive topics, I usually talk with one or two close friends.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words like 'Umm' and some awkward phrasing. Try to avoid fillers and use clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and improve coherence.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to fully understand the other person's emotions and feelings. Moreover, I can express my genuine thoughts and emotions more effectively than through social media, which feels more distant.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and redundant phrases like 'sometimes from time to time'. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, avoid redundancy, and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

예시: Sometimes, it depends on the situation. Usually, we argue over trivial things, such as deciding where to go for our next hangout. These disagreements are generally about small matters.

× Charlie Wood Friend is a great way for me to relax and unwind after an exhausting day.

✓ Chatting with friends is a great way for me to relax and unwind after an exhausting day.

The original sentence uses 'Charlie Wood Friend' which seems incorrect and singular. The intended meaning is likely 'chatting with friends', which is plural and fits the context better.

× When talking with friends I normally UMM seek out emotional support and connections with them.

✓ When talking with friends, I normally seek out emotional support and connections with them.

The filler 'UMM' should be removed for clarity. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase 'When talking with friends' improves sentence structure.

× I normally is take the role of an active communicator rather than a listener so I talk a lot of my feelings and thoughts on.

✓ I normally take the role of an active communicator rather than a listener, so I talk a lot about my feelings and thoughts.

The verb 'is take' is incorrect; 'I' requires the base form 'take'. Also, 'talk a lot of my feelings and thoughts on' is ungrammatical; it should be 'talk a lot about my feelings and thoughts'. A comma before 'so' improves readability.

× when discussing an upcoming exams, we're doing revision cramming and normally would like to chat with a group of people to hear multiple perspectives.

✓ when discussing upcoming exams, we're doing revision cramming and normally would like to chat with a group of people to hear multiple perspectives.

The phrase 'an upcoming exams' mixes singular article 'an' with plural noun 'exams'. Removing 'an' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× Umm, definitely face to face, because in this case I will really capture what my audience, their emotions, their feelings and I'm more likely to express my genuine umm, thoughts, emotions to them.

✓ Umm, definitely face to face, because in this case I can really capture my audience's emotions and feelings, and I'm more likely to express my genuine thoughts and emotions to them.

The phrase 'capture what my audience, their emotions, their feelings' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'capture my audience's emotions and feelings'. Also, 'will' is changed to 'can' to better express ability in this context.

× Sometimes from time to time I think really depends on the situation but normally I'd say over really trivial things like we would argue about what where should we go in the next hangout place or like really small stuff honestly.

✓ Sometimes, from time to time, I think it really depends on the situation, but normally I'd say we argue over really trivial things, like where we should go for the next hangout or other small stuff, honestly.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word order, such as 'what where should we go'. Correcting to 'where we should go' and adding commas improves clarity. Also, 'argue about what where should we go' is corrected to 'argue over... where we should go'.