Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些语法错误和重复的填充词（如“uh”）影响了流畅度。建议减少口头禅，注意语法，如“sometimes it also a good way”应为“sometimes it is also a good way”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免冗长。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps strengthen our relationships. Also, talking with them can relieve stress since they offer comfort and support when I face problems.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构稍显简单，且部分表达不够地道，如“ask for help to my friends”应为“ask my friends for help”。建议使用更多连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, when I see something funny on social media, I share it with my friends. However, if I encounter problems in real life, I ask my friends for help, and they usually assist me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“you can. You can just see”。建议避免重复，注意句子完整性。同时，使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I enjoy deep conversations. They help us understand each other better and build a closer relationship. In contrast, group chats often focus on superficial topics like gossip.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“prefer com to communicate”应为“prefer to communicate”。“somebody interactions”应为“physical interactions”。建议注意语法和词汇准确性，句子更完整。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to feel my friend's emotions better. Also, physical interactions like touching or hugging help express feelings more effectively.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如“It's just can be reduced”应为“it can only be reduced”。句子未完成，缺少具体内容。建议完整表达观点，避免口头禅，注意语法。

예시: Yes, it's hard to avoid arguments with friends, but we can reduce them by understanding each other's opinions. Even though we share similar experiences, we sometimes have different ideas.

× sometimes it also a good way to, uh, get rid of negativity

✓ sometimes it is also a good way to, uh, get rid of negativity

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'it' to form the correct 'there be' structure. 'It is' is necessary to link the subject and complement properly.

× so I will ask for help to my friends

✓ so I will ask for help from my friends

The correct preposition to use with 'ask for help' when indicating the source is 'from', not 'to'. 'Ask for help from someone' is the proper phrase.

× even though we are friends and we shares the same experiences of our lives

✓ even though we are friends and we share the same experiences of our lives

The pronoun 'we' requires the verb 'share' without 's' because 'we' is plural. 'Shares' is third person singular form and does not agree with 'we'.

× even though we are friends and we shares the same experiences of our lives, but uh we still have different ideas about

✓ even though we are friends and we share the same experiences of our lives, we still have different ideas about

Using both 'even though' and 'but' together is redundant. 'Even though' already introduces a contrast, so 'but' should be omitted to avoid incorrect conjunction use.

× Uh, if you just chat with a group of people you can. You can just see some shallow topics such as gossip.

✓ Uh, if you just chat with a group of people, you can just see some shallow topics such as gossip.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly split. Combining the two parts into one sentence with proper punctuation improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I prefer com to communicate face to face because I think it's a good way to feel the vibe of your friend and sometimes you can have somebody interactions such as touch and hug which helps you to express.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's a good way to feel the vibe of your friend and sometimes you can have some bodily interactions such as touch and hug which help you to express.

'Com' is a typo and should be 'to'. 'Somebody interactions' is incorrect; it should be 'some bodily interactions'. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'interactions'.