Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid repeating words like 'mostly' and use correct expressions such as 'I usually chat with my best friend for one to two hours.' Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and ensure clarity.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time, especially with my best friend. We usually talk for one to two hours about various topics.

제안: Focus on giving a clear and relevant answer. Avoid unclear phrases like 'Disney basics information.' Instead, mention common topics you discuss and use proper tenses and linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually chat about our daily activities, such as what we are doing, what we did yesterday, and our plans for the future.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words like 'if' and 'but' properly. Also, clarify your ideas by saying, for example, 'I prefer chatting one-on-one for private matters, but I enjoy group chats for general topics.'

예시: It depends on my mood and the information. If the matter is important and private, I prefer chatting with one friend. However, for general topics, I enjoy chatting in a group.

제안: Use correct grammar and expressions. Say 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and interactive.' Also, add a supporting detail to enrich your answer.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and allows better interaction with the other person.

제안: Clarify your answer and correct grammar. For example, say 'Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about simple topics, which is common in all friendships.' Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about simple topics, but I think it is a normal part of any friendship.

× I talk like a one hour 2 hour long communication with my friends.

✓ I talk for about one to two hours with my friends.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a one hour 2 hour long communication' which is awkward and ungrammatical. The phrase should express duration properly using 'for about one to two hours'. Also, 'communication' is uncountable here and not the best choice; 'talk' or 'conversation' fits better.

× I talk like a one hour 2 hour long communication with my friends.

✓ I talk for about one to two hours with my friends.

The preposition 'like' is incorrectly used to express duration. The correct preposition to indicate duration is 'for'.

× It's all about a Disney basics information like what are you doing, what did you do today, where are you going in yesterday and etcetera.

✓ It's all about basic Disney information like what you are doing, what you did today, where you went yesterday, and so on.

The phrase 'in yesterday' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted here. Also, 'like' is used correctly to introduce examples. 'Basics information' should be 'basic information' as 'basic' is an adjective.

× If the information are very important and secretly I like to chat with my single friends and if the information about the all the things I love to chat with in the group.

✓ If the information is very important and secret, I like to chat with my single friends, and if the information is about all things, I love to chat in a group.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular, so 'are' should be 'is'. Also, 'secretly' is an adverb but the adjective 'secret' fits better here. 'Single friends' is awkward; 'individual friends' or 'one friend at a time' is better, but kept as 'single friends' for minimal change.

× I prefer to communication with face to face because it feel more acceptable and more interact with the another person.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more natural and allows more interaction with the other person.

'Communication' is a noun; the verb form 'communicate' is needed here. 'With face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' is an adverbial phrase and does not need 'with'. 'Feel' should be 'feels' to agree with singular subject. 'More acceptable' is awkward; 'more natural' or 'better' is more appropriate. 'More interact' is incorrect; 'allows more interaction' is correct. 'The another person' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed before 'another'.

× Yeah, sometime I agree with my friend on the simple topic and it is the common.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I disagree with my friend on simple topics and it is common.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Agree' is likely incorrect in context; 'disagree' fits better when talking about arguments. 'The simple topic' should be 'simple topics' for generality. 'It is the common' is incorrect; 'it is common' is correct.