Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, use 'because' correctly and avoid unnecessary phrases like 'when I will free'.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to exchange opinions and communicate effectively. Therefore, I often have conversations with them whenever I have free time.

제안: Improve coherence by using linking words properly and avoid filler words like 'or and'. Be more specific about the topics and explain why you find these conversations refreshing.

예시: I usually talk about a variety of topics, such as recent news, work-related problems, or our mutual friends. I find these conversations refreshing because they help me stay informed and connected.

제안: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and using precise vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'or any like that'.

예시: I prefer chatting with groups because it allows me to communicate with many people simultaneously and exchange a variety of opinions, which I find very enjoyable.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and express your opinion clearly.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because online conversations can sometimes lead to misunderstandings. Face-to-face interactions allow for direct and clearer communication.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Unfortunately, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. In such cases, conflicts arise, and we need to resolve them through communication.

× I often have a conversation with my friends when I will free.

✓ I often have a conversation with my friends when I am free.

The phrase 'when I will free' is incorrect because 'will' is not used with time clauses introduced by 'when'. Instead, the present simple tense 'am' should be used to indicate a future time in this context.

× I usually talk about variety of topics, for example the recent news or and the working problems or any topics about our common friends.

✓ I usually talk about a variety of topics, for example recent news, work problems, or any topics about our common friends.

The phrase 'variety of topics' requires the article 'a' before 'variety'. Also, 'the recent news' and 'the working problems' are better expressed without 'the' and with more natural phrasing: 'recent news' and 'work problems'. The conjunction 'or and' is incorrect; only 'or' is needed.

× I prefer chatting with any groups because I can communicate with a lot of people at the same time and I can exchange variety of opinions or any like that, so I think that's really great.

✓ I prefer chatting with groups because I can communicate with a lot of people at the same time and I can exchange a variety of opinions or things like that, so I think that's really great.

The phrase 'any groups' is incorrect; 'groups' without 'any' is more natural here. Also, 'exchange variety of opinions' needs the article 'a' before 'variety'. The phrase 'or any like that' is ungrammatical and should be replaced with 'or things like that'.

× A definitely face to face communications.

✓ Definitely face-to-face communication.

The article 'A' is incorrect before 'definitely'. Also, 'communications' should be singular 'communication' in this context. Hyphens are needed in 'face-to-face' as it is a compound adjective.

× So at face to face communication is, uh, can connect directly.

✓ So face-to-face communication can connect directly.

The phrase 'at face to face communication' is incorrect; the preposition 'at' is unnecessary. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. The sentence structure is awkward and should be simplified.

× Unfortunately I sometimes have umm argues or fight with my friends.

✓ Unfortunately, I sometimes have arguments or fights with my friends.

The word 'argues' is incorrect as a noun; the correct noun form is 'arguments'. Also, 'fight' should be plural 'fights' to match 'arguments' and the plural context.

× It depends on the occasions, but sometimes we have a different opinions and in that case we have conflict with others.

✓ It depends on the occasion, but sometimes we have different opinions and in that case we have conflicts with others.

The phrase 'the occasions' should be singular 'the occasion' or just 'occasion' to be more natural. 'A different opinions' is incorrect because 'opinions' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'conflict' should be plural 'conflicts' to match the plural context.