Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. For example, say "I like chatting with my friends because it is convenient and comfortable."

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is convenient and makes me feel comfortable.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to organize your answer clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the topics you discuss.

예시: Generally, I chat about my daily life and activities I have done, especially any special events that happened recently.

제안: Complete your sentences and use correct expressions. Also, use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is more personal, but sometimes I chat in a group depending on my mood and the situation.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and clear.

예시: I usually prefer to communicate online because it is convenient, but if the situation requires, I am happy to talk face-to-face.

제안: Avoid filler words and use correct grammar. Explain your answer clearly with linking words to show cause and effect.

예시: I usually avoid arguing with friends, but if necessary, I argue to reach a positive outcome and better understanding.

× Yes, of course, I like to chatting with my friends as it is very convenient and more comfortable with a friend.

✓ Yes, of course, I like chatting with my friends as it is very convenient and more comfortable with a friend.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' instead of the infinitive 'to chatting'. The correct structure is 'like + verb-ing'.

× Uh, generally I, uh, chat about my, uh, daily life and overall, uh, uh, activities, uh, which was performed by me and, uh, something special event.

✓ Uh, generally I chat about my daily life and overall activities which I have performed and some special events.

The phrase 'which was performed by me' is awkward and incorrect in this context. Using 'which I have performed' is more appropriate. Also, 'something special event' should be pluralized to 'some special events' to match the context.

× Uh, generally I, uh, chat about my, uh, daily life and overall, uh, uh, activities, uh, which was performed by me and, uh, something special event.

✓ Uh, generally I chat about my daily life and overall activities which I have performed and some special events.

The phrase 'something special event' is incorrect because 'something' is singular and 'event' is singular, but the context suggests multiple events. It should be 'some special events' to indicate plural.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend, but in some situation I choose to chat in a group.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend, but in some situations I choose to chat in a group.

The word 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because it refers to more than one possible circumstance.

× It depends upon my mood and my necessary.

✓ It depends upon my mood and my necessity.

The word 'necessary' is an adjective, but here a noun is needed. The correct noun form is 'necessity'.

× If necessary, I would like to chat in a.

✓ If necessary, I would like to chat in a group.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'group' completes the sentence and makes it meaningful.

× Normally I prefer to chat online as it is easy to communicate in every situation.

✓ Normally I prefer to chat online as it is easy to communicate in any situation.

The phrase 'in every situation' is less natural here; 'in any situation' is more appropriate to express generality.

× Face to face chatting is not possible and difficult also.

✓ Face-to-face chatting is not always possible and is also difficult.

The sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. Adding 'not always' and 'is also' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I generally choose to chat online but in according to situation.

✓ So I generally choose to chat online but according to the situation.

The phrase 'in according to situation' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'according to the situation'.

× If face to face chatting is necessary then I openly communicate with each other.

✓ If face-to-face chatting is necessary, then I openly communicate with my friends.

The phrase 'communicate with each other' is incorrect here because the subject is singular 'I'. It should be 'communicate with my friends' to clarify the object.

× No, I don't really do that, but uh, according to uh situation if need, I definitely to argue with friends for positive response and good results.

✓ No, I don't really do that, but according to the situation, if needed, I definitely argue with friends for positive responses and good results.

The phrase 'if need' is incorrect; it should be 'if needed'. Also, 'definitely to argue' is incorrect; modal verb 'definitely' should be followed by base verb 'argue'.