Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“is make me relaxed”应为“makes me relaxed”，且“starlings”可能是误用，应为“startlings”或其他词。建议注意语法正确性，避免使用不准确或无意义的词汇，同时回答应更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me relax and we can share different aspects of our daily lives, such as entertainment and personal experiences.

제안: 回答中充满犹豫和不连贯的表达，且部分词汇使用不当或无意义，如“believe bibliography, umm, OSA”。建议减少填充词，使用清晰具体的内容，避免无关或错误词汇。

예시: As a student, I usually chat with my friends about our studies, especially topics related to economics and other subjects we are interested in.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it it can helps me to understanding”应为“it helps me understand”。最后一句话表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it helps me understand them more deeply compared to talking with a group.

제안: 回答中表达不完整且有语法错误，如“you can say the body language”应为“you can see the body language”。建议完整表达观点，注意语法和词汇准确性。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see body language and better understand the other person's emotions.

제안: 回答中语法错误明显，如“It can't be advised that”表达不清晰且不合适。建议用更自然的表达说明观点，避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different opinions, but it's normal in any friendship.

× Yes, because I think chatting with friends is make me relaxed and we can communicate with many aspect of our daily life such as starlings, umm, entertainment and so on.

✓ Yes, because I think chatting with friends makes me relaxed and we can communicate about many aspects of our daily life such as starling, umm, entertainment and so on.

动词短语中，'is make' 应改为第三人称单数形式 'makes'，因为主语是单数 'chatting with friends'。此外，'aspect' 应为复数 'aspects'，因为指多个方面。

× Yes, because I think chatting with friends is make me relaxed and we can communicate with many aspect of our daily life such as starlings, umm, entertainment and so on.

✓ Yes, because I think chatting with friends makes me relaxed and we can communicate about many aspects of our daily life such as starling, umm, entertainment and so on.

'many' 后面应接可数名词复数形式，故 'aspect' 应改为 'aspects'。

× Oh, well, now I'm a student, so I, uh, usually talk about uh, uh, studies and uh, you know, economic books, believe bibliography, umm, OSA. But you know, we also spend many times, much times.

✓ Oh, well, now I'm a student, so I usually talk about studies and, you know, economic books, bibliography, umm, OSA. But you know, we also spend a lot of time.

'many times' 和 'much times' 用法错误，'time' 在此表示不可数名词，应使用 'a lot of time'。

× But you know, we also spend many times, much times.

✓ But you know, we also spend a lot of time.

'times' 复数形式不适用于表示时间的不可数用法，应使用 'time' 并搭配适当量词 'a lot of'。

× I prefer chatting with only one friend. The reason is that it it can helps me to understanding deeply her or him.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend. The reason is that it can help me to understand her or him deeply.

'it can helps' 中 'helps' 应为原形 'help'，因为情态动词 'can' 后接动词原形。

× I prefer chatting with only one friend. The reason is that it it can helps me to understanding deeply her or him.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend. The reason is that it can help me to understand her or him deeply.

'to understanding' 应为不定式 'to understand'，因为 'to' 后应接动词原形。

× I like having a conversation face to face because face to face you can say the body language and you can know the emotions with the. MMM.

✓ I like having a conversation face to face because face to face you can see the body language and you can know the emotions.

'say the body language' 用词错误，应为 'see the body language'。此外，句尾 'with the. MMM.' 不完整，应删除。

× Yes, you know, we have different thoughts and we also have different idea.

✓ Yes, you know, we have different thoughts and we also have different ideas.

'idea' 应为复数 'ideas'，因为前文提到 'different thoughts'，保持一致。

× It can't be advised that.

✓ It can't be advised.

句子结构不完整，'that' 多余，应删除。