Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和犹豫词汇，建议减少填充词如“uh”，并且句子结构可以更简洁自然，避免冗长。可以直接表达观点并用具体理由支持。

예시: Honestly, I don't enjoy chatting with friends very much because I prefer spending time alone reading books or doing other activities. However, I do appreciate learning new information from them occasionally.

제안: 回答中有犹豫词和不完整表达，建议使用更连贯的句子，并且具体说明喜欢的话题，避免模糊的“something else”。

예시: Unlike many young people, I prefer discussing topics such as travel, books, and studies rather than makeup or gossip.

제안: 回答中有重复词和犹豫词，建议简化表达并补充具体原因，避免模糊的“people just say something very uh”。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations, whereas group chats tend to be more superficial.

제안: 回答中语法错误和重复词较多，建议使用更准确的表达，清晰区分两种沟通方式的不同，并避免重复。

예시: Thanks to technology, we can have video calls on social media, but I still prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more real and personal.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复词，清晰表达观点和原因。

예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe arguments are pointless. Instead, we calmly discuss our different opinions to resolve any issues peacefully.

× I don't like to chat with my friends, although I can get a lot of new information from them, but I prefer to uh, just stay at home by myself reading books or do something else by myself.

✓ I don't like to chat with my friends because, although I can get a lot of new information from them, I prefer to just stay at home by myself reading books or doing something else by myself.

句子中同时使用了“although”和“but”两个转折连词，造成连接词使用错误。应选择一个合适的连词来表达转折关系，避免重复使用。建议使用“because”引导原因状语从句，或只用“although”引导让步状语从句。

× I prefer to uh, just stay at home by myself reading books or do something else by myself.

✓ I prefer to just stay at home by myself reading books or doing something else by myself.

在并列结构中，动词形式应保持一致。这里“reading books”是动名词形式，后面“do something else”应改为“doing something else”以保持形式一致。

× Not like other young students. I don't like to talk about, uh, makeup, umm, and gossip.

✓ Unlike other young students, I don't like to talk about makeup and gossip.

句子结构不完整，“Not like other young students.”是一个不完整的句子，应改为完整的句子结构，如“Unlike other young students, ...”来表达比较关系。

× If I have to choose one from from this, I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can have some deep talk and it's more meaningful for me.

✓ If I have to choose one from this, I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can have some deep talks and it's more meaningful for me.

“from from”重复，应去掉一个“from”。另外，“deep talk”应为复数“deep talks”更符合习惯表达。

× First of all, thanks to the develop of the technology so that we can also chat face to face via social media, but there are still something different between face to face and via social media.

✓ First of all, thanks to the development of technology, we can also chat face to face via social media, but there are still some differences between face to face communication and chatting via social media.

“develop”应为名词“development”；“something different”应为复数“some differences”；“between face to face and via social media”表达不完整，应补充完整名词短语。

× I prefer to face to face because it's more reality, reality.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more real.

“more reality”用法错误，应使用形容词“real”来修饰名词，且“face to face”作为形容词时应连写为“face-to-face”。

× I should say never. I never argue with friends because I think argue is meaningless.

✓ I should say never. I never argue with friends because I think arguing is meaningless.

“argue”作为名词使用不正确，应使用动名词“arguing”表示“争吵”这一行为。