Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc cá nhân, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như "Umm" và nên cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để tránh lặp lại ý (ví dụ: "helped me process my feelings" và "clear my head" có thể gộp lại). Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends because they understand me well. Talking with them helps me process my feelings and clear my mind, which I find very entertaining and relaxing.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "gonna" không phù hợp trong bài thi IELTS. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối. Bạn cũng nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "feeling emotion" và dùng từ chính xác hơn.

예시: It depends on the friend I am talking to. With casual friends, we usually discuss hobbies or how we are doing. However, with close friends, we talk about deeper topics such as childhood experiences and personal feelings, sharing without fear of judgment.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng và có ý chính, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "my only one friend" nên là "only one friend" hoặc "just one friend". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I definitely prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group of people I don't know well. Talking to someone who understands me is more comfortable and enjoyable, and we can laugh about everything.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ "it's feel" nên là "it feels". Câu cuối cùng không rõ nghĩa và gây khó hiểu, bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I am comfortable with both types of communication; however, I definitely prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more natural and connected. For instance, when chatting on social media, you cannot see the other person's facial expressions or feel their vibe, which can sometimes lead to misunderstandings or even risks.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý dùng từ chính xác, ví dụ "I do agree with friends" nên là "I do argue with friends". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "I always decided" nên là "I always decide" hoặc "I usually decide".

예시: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes. Arguments are hard to avoid in any relationship, including friendships. However, I usually try to stay calm and talk things through with them to resolve any problems.

× especially for those who are close with me since they always get me and also talking with them helped me process my feelings.

✓ especially those who are close to me since they always get me and also talking with them helped me process my feelings.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'close'. The correct preposition to indicate a close relationship is 'to'.

× Umm it's clear my head and it's very entertaining when talking with them.

✓ Umm it clears my head and it's very entertaining when talking with them.

The verb 'clear' should be in the present simple form 'clears' to agree with the subject 'it'. 'It's clear my head' is incorrect because 'clear' is used as an adjective here, but the intended meaning is a verb.

× Depends on the friend that I'm talking with.

✓ It depends on the friend that I'm talking with.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× If it's just a social friend then the topic is gonna be casual thing like or what is your hobby or how are you doing.

✓ If it's just a social friend then the topic is gonna be casual things like 'What is your hobby?' or 'How are you doing?'.

The phrase 'casual thing like or what is your hobby' is incorrect. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match multiple examples, and the examples should be properly introduced and punctuated.

× We can share our feeling emotion without feeling judged or awkward.

✓ We can share our feelings and emotions without feeling judged or awkward.

'Feeling emotion' is incorrect; 'feelings' and 'emotions' are countable nouns and should be plural. Also, 'feeling' as a noun is singular, so 'feelings' is appropriate here.

× I definitely prefer talking with my only one friend rather than a chat with a group of people that I don't know much about.

✓ I definitely prefer talking with my one and only friend rather than chatting with a group of people that I don't know much about.

The phrase 'my only one friend' is awkward; 'my one and only friend' is the correct expression. Also, 'a chat' should be 'chatting' to match the verb form.

× Talking with someone who gets you is way more comfortable, is more entertaining, and we can laugh about everything.

✓ Talking to someone who gets you is way more comfortable, more entertaining, and we can laugh about everything.

The correct preposition after 'talking' in this context is 'to' rather than 'with'.

× I'm comfortable with what type of communications, however, if I have to choose, I will definitely choose to have a conversation in real life since it's feel more natural and connected.

✓ I'm comfortable with any type of communication; however, if I have to choose, I will definitely choose to have a conversation in real life since it feels more natural and connected.

'What type of communications' is incorrect; 'any type of communication' is appropriate. Also, 'it's feel' should be 'it feels' to agree with the subject.

× For example, when you're talking to someone on the social media, you wouldn't see their face especially if you couldn't feel the vibe.

✓ For example, when you're talking to someone on social media, you wouldn't see their face, especially if you can't feel the vibe.

The phrase 'on the social media' is incorrect; 'on social media' is the correct expression. Also, tense consistency requires 'can't' instead of 'couldn't'.

× Also, is there's a risk that you can be dangerous for you?

✓ Also, there is a risk that it can be dangerous for you.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Correct structure is 'there is a risk that it can be dangerous for you.'

× Yes, I do agree with friends.

✓ Yes, I do argue with friends.

The question is about arguing with friends, so 'agree with friends' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'argue with friends'.

× But I always decided to sit back and talk with my friends to solve the problem.

✓ But I always decide to sit back and talk with my friends to solve the problem.

The adverb 'always' indicates habitual action, so the present tense 'decide' is appropriate rather than past tense 'decided'.