Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时时态混乱，且句子结构不完整，表达不够自然。建议使用一致的时态，简洁表达情绪变化，并补充完整句子。

예시: I like chatting with my friends when I feel happy because I want to share interesting things with them. However, when I am upset, I prefer to be alone and not talk much.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，缺乏连贯性。建议用简单明了的句子表达聊天内容，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: We usually talk about interesting new things that happened recently. For example, we discuss celebrities, new brands, products, and the latest technology.

제안: 表达较为直接，但语法和用词有误。建议注意冠词使用，时态一致，并丰富细节使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am an introverted person. I often feel embarrassed in groups and find it hard to enjoy the conversation.

제안: 回答不完整且语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯句子，并说明原因。

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media because it allows me to think carefully before sending messages. Face-to-face communication can be stressful when I need to express important thoughts.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，句子不完整。建议避免重复，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并补充完整句子。

예시: I sometimes argue with my friends, but usually we share the same opinions. I prefer to be friends with people who think similarly to me.

× When I was happy and I want to share some interesting things with my friends, I usually ask some of my friends to have a coffee and chat with them.

✓ When I was happy and wanted to share some interesting things with my friends, I usually asked some of my friends to have a coffee and chat with them.

句子中描述过去的情况，动词时态应保持一致，使用过去时。原句中 'want' 和 'ask' 应改为过去式 'wanted' 和 'asked'。

× But when I was upset and disappointed.

✓ But when I was upset and disappointed, I usually kept to myself.

原句为不完整句，缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构错误。需要补充完整句子，使其表达完整。

× On we usually try some interesting new things happened recently and some the same topic we both like, such as the star and the new brand and some new products, some new techniques that they are.

✓ We usually talk about some interesting new things that happened recently and some topics we both like, such as stars, new brands, new products, and new techniques.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语，且表达不清晰。需要调整句子结构，明确主语和谓语，使句子通顺。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm introverted person and I don't have much friends to chat with.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm an introverted person and I don't have many friends to chat with.

'introverted person' 前缺少冠词 'an'，'much friends' 应改为 'many friends'，因为 'friends' 是可数名词，需用 'many'。

× I usually feel embarrassed and I couldn't find the interesting.

✓ I usually feel embarrassed and I can't find it interesting.

'find the interesting' 用法错误，应为 'find it interesting'，'interesting' 是形容词，需用宾语 'it'。

× I prefer to communicate via social media because I can send a message when I. I think about something important when I communicate face to face, I already.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I can send a message whenever I want. I think about something important when I communicate face to face.

原句断句错误，表达不完整。需要补充完整句子，使意思明确。

× I sometime argue with my friend, but most of the time we usually have the same point.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friend, but most of the time we usually have the same opinion.

'sometime' 应为副词 'sometimes'，表示频率；'point' 应改为 'opinion'，更符合语境。

× I I like to make friends with the people who has who has the same opinion with me.

✓ I like to make friends with people who have the same opinion as me.

重复 'I' 错误；'who has' 应为复数 'who have'；'opinion with me' 应改为 'opinion as me'。