Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有较多语法错误和重复的填充词，影响了表达的流畅性。建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用“uh”，并注意动词时态和形式的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. When I was a child, I often talked with my best friends while playing with our pets or visiting parks. Chatting helps me relax and relieve stress.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容较为笼统。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免重复填充词，并提供更具体的聊天话题。

예시: We usually chat about our families, friends, and funny stories. For example, we share jokes or interesting experiences that happened during the day.

제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显口语化且有语法错误。建议简化表达，避免不必要的解释，使用更准确的句子结构。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am introverted. I feel more comfortable having a one-on-one conversation than talking in a group.

제안: 回答中有较多填充词和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议减少重复词汇，使用连贯的句子，并明确表达观点。

예시: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media. Face-to-face helps me understand others' emotions, while social media makes me feel safe and more open.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不连贯。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用完整的句子表达观点。

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends. I believe friendship is about sharing happiness, and arguing only brings negative feelings.

× I prefer to chatting with my best friends

✓ I preferred chatting with my best friends

动词prefer后面接动名词形式，且句子描述过去的习惯，动词时态应为过去式preferred。

× just to went to our, the parks

✓ just went to our parks

动词go的过去式是went，to后面不应加to，且the在此处多余。

× chatting with my good friends will, uh, relaxing myself and to relaxing my pressure

✓ chatting with my good friends will relax me and relieve my pressure

动词relax和relieve后应接宾语，且此处应使用动词原形，表达将来时。

× such as our families and some our friends

✓ such as our families and some of our friends

some后面需要加of来连接名词短语。

× or some humors

✓ or some humor

humor是不可数名词，不应加复数形式。

× girls always like to talk some humors

✓ girls always like to talk about some humor

动词talk后面需要加介词about，humor为不可数名词。

× talk with only one my friend

✓ talk with only one of my friends

one后面需要加of来连接复数名词friends。

× I test my 16 personalities

✓ I took my 16 personalities test

动词test用法错误，应该用take test的表达。

× the result is IFP

✓ the result is IFP

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× the I means introverted

✓ the I means introverted

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I don't like to talk with a lot of people

✓ I don't like to talk with a lot of people

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× communicated to face to face

✓ communicate face to face

communicate后不加to，face to face作为副词短语直接使用。

× they will make, uh, people to realize, uh, the people you talk with, uh, their emotion

✓ they will help people realize the emotions of the people you talk with

make后接动词原形realize，不加to；emotion应为复数emotions。

× use the social media will make me feel very safety

✓ using social media makes me feel very safe

使用动名词using作主语，safe为形容词，不能用safety（名词）。

× I will become more open

✓ I will become more open

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I think the friends, uh, means you need to share some happiness things with them

✓ I think friends mean you need to share some happy things with them

friends为复数，谓语动词应用mean；happiness是名词，需用形容词happy修饰things。

× You don't you, you don't need to argue with them

✓ You don't need to argue with them

重复使用you don't，语句冗余，应删去多余部分。

× the negative, the negative feelings will make will make our

✓ Negative feelings will affect us

句子不完整，需补充谓语和宾语，使句子完整通顺。